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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
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    It was interesting story! Some grammatical error can be seen however this story is getting interesting. It's not that good nor its bad there's a lot of improvement which I think the author is working on. Still this story is making me hype that I am thinking what will happen in the future chapters, because I notice that the author is slowly building up everythin! Thank you for the wonderful story!

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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! Its getting interesting for me! I can't wait! There was some foreshadowing and i really cant wait.

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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
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    I just wanted to say that, I read his new story... and it made me cry and amaze... Don't trust him...this author is somewhat a tsundere...

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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
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    As soon as he said that, one by one, Tales companions soon fell on the ground, after they fell, their body slowly turning to dust as their souls was then entrapped by a golden bright chains that prevent them from escaping. Tales who was in dumbfounded appearance look at the person who used those chains. There he saw the one who used it, it was the woman who was next beside Azrael.
    The Villain in the novel gave me his body: I was a fool
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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
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    i feel like i've been hit.

    "to tell you the truth, bastard you already know me and lots of bastard like you in your world were the same. Hell! Some even hate me it made me laugh, they were just reading at my fate, my act, until at the end of my life! They were so happy that I died in a cruel way! HAH! Those foolish people who found their selves feel satisfied to see someone died by the hands of their favorite character makes me puke as shit! Yeah, bastard your one of them, you actually smirked of how I died, well for a moment which made you felt guilty. Well, after knowing my short story that is…"
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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
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    lol, his words XD

    "oops, bad habit there…. Anyway, hmm the River of Life and Expiry was a road for souls like us to travel until we reach the end of this river, you see that old wooden oak bridge that the color Is gray? Yeah, that one bastard, when a soul reaches that bridge, they just had to wait there, well not all soul are lucky, why? Well, you already see those ghosts at the river, right? Should I still have to explain it again for you so, you can manage to stack those things inside of your little brain?" said by the figure as he tilts his head "ah, damn don't get irritated by my words, its my bad habit… anyway, some fools like you who took a peek in the river meet their end, if you wondering how, if you keep staring at the river that is full of vengeful ghosts... you know what? scratch that, let's just call them spirits. If you keep staring at them, you won't notice that the spirits in the river is actually pulling you, you did not realize it but if I did not see you almost about to kissed the spirits that pulling you, then, you know what will happen to you, a fool like you and those spirits in the river will continue to get swayed by The River of life and expiry, ha! Maybe you should join them and build a party to celebrate of joining them!"
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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
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    ".... please...mama.... stop waiting for that man who would not bother to come...please forget about him and rest.... please...."
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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
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    even though Edmund was still a 3-year-old child when he heard those conversation, he still understood everything and learn something.
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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
    Commented

    F...I'm getting emotional... holy...

    "mama... I love you... why don't you?"
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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
    Commented

    This is really sad...

    The word that came to her mouth was sorry, as her eyes were looking at the baby who's sucking her breast to fill its stomach, she kept crying silently so, not to disturb the baby in her arms.
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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
    Commented

    This is interesting.. .

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    Extra wants to see her smile
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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapter!

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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
    Commented

    This looks interesting

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Novel
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  • Secrecyuot
    Secrecyuot2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for publishing introduction! I also like your story author!

    Ch 1 Introduction
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