Sorrias

Stop with these notes bro you aren't on QuestionableQuesting

i couldn't handle reading past page 5 so no

Your grammar is atrocious, like genuine dogshit, use chat gtp or grammarly if you have to but edit everything

As expected of those... not people

Archon's are enemies too but are you just going to go with npc's?

This better be a translation i can think of no other way someone would be this much of a retard

Please, PLEASE don't go to hestia i KNOW that objectively she is an amazing Goddess personality wise but it's just so damn cliche

If he's alone use ' ' for thoughts, he has 0 reason to be speaking alone

You have my interest, maybe my erection, depends on you

That harem introduction was horrible like holy shit how does a human being have the courage to write that garbage?