too convenient ...... the plot is too conveniently in favour of the mc. if any equipment related to mc drops it becomes bronze or silver.

I feel like smashing something whenever a character like Raymond appears in any web novel. They are just too toxic.

this is getting stupider and stupider I had some great expectations from this novel the first few chapters were good but now it just feels stupid and cliché .I hope it gets better ahead

finally a normal readable chapter thank you very much🥳

if you are going to repeat everything there is no point in changing povs

there's no point in changing POV

1 chap per day also fine but instead of working on multiple novels improve your English first please 🥺

😔 feels like I'm reading a text adventure game

is this inspired from let me game in peace the English is readable but not enjoyable to read.

The concept and story is good enough but it lacks in world building specially when we talk about Interstellar civilization and the universe. There is a lot of confusion when talking about solar system and galaxies.

One of the best books I have read so far.

am I imagining right did he become a "sperm"[img=nervous]

what paragraph? it's just one or two sentences.

The story is well written (although the setting is similar to some other novels). The beginning was slow-paced and had very little character development and world background(which is still a lot lacking), but the story progression was fine so no complaints. The MC sometimes acts like a dense-headed Dunce who lacks a presence of mind but it's funny that way and his situational awareness is good. Since the system is a shop type the business aspect felt a bit lacking since it was mostly used to suppress powerful people and also it is a lot less talkative and doesn't help much( asking a low IQ MC to figure out its functions on his own is like asking a newborn baby to walk) The magic and spell system and world background and development leave a lot to be desired. Let's just hope new worlds are not introduced when the MC has not even explored the 1% of his current word. All in all, I like it and was worth reading. (Evaluation after reading 163 chapters)

MC has come a long way before when he saw bite marks in his mother's neck or his own neck he completely ignored it like a dunce he really has grown