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Dude , I really never saw these kind of mcs , really want to read about them. I don’t know why people hate on them too much, it’s great if the MC has certain code to follow

I agree but u used dexter man, 😂😂

Ok , You Are A Psychopath. Why is there a lot of words in BOLD . Have mercy on yourself man

This is an honest criticism from a reader( who can't write a sentence without GPT) about the narrative structure for future stories. At the end of the day, thanks for writing this piece of fanfiction

This is annoying, every 4 paragraphs you mention a future scenario. Hell. I consider these sentences as spoilers. Just show it in the future, don't need to tell me what will happen.

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Saw the rating less than 4, felt obligated to give it a 5. The story has flaws, but as a crossover, it is amazing ddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

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this is amazing, didn't know Webnovel had good fanfics. I hate how people critique this work to high standards outside of the pile of shit on this site. readers of Webnovel had their brains scrambled by a lot of shitty Chinese translations. I say this with full confidence you wrote an amazing story, of course, there were some grammatical mistakes but your storytelling is top-notch.

Webnovel is weird. the great stuff has shitty reviews and the shitty Chinese translations are commended thru the roof. the fanfic is great if not the greatest mushoku fanfic