ApoloJackson
Graduating in Accounting Sciences who is looking for some peace
of reading
6065
Read books
The biggest problem with this story is the MC. 10 years of training, 10 years, and he remains the same empty, hollow shell. And it's not a matter of waiting for chapters, it's logic. If you wanted to keep the MC like a potato and develop it little by little, there would be no point in doing this training during this time. It's torturous to read how he walks and acts even though he's that age, that training, and his "ability."
One question, after that, access to the chapters will only be possible when paid or will you post them little by little on the webnovel?
The story is interesting, but now it has entered the standard rhythm of paid stories. Short chapters, without much development and a little long. Meanwhile, the number of privileges on the author's paywall increases. Well, he posts and does what he wants, it's not my right to criticize that. I'm just warning those who can't afford it not to get too anxious.
A good story, with a good rhythm and an interesting MC. Unohana Yandere for me so far (chapter 26) is the highlight of the story, apart from the fact that in a strange way the two have good chemistry. It's early days so a final assessment is a bit difficult, but the potential is there. Good work author, hugs xd