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Slyv028mthCommented" Senior brother, I am coming!!"- Slyv021yrCommented
You know ,this scene kinda reminds me of crazy mode daniel from lookism.
he was standing there, he's the one who hit me.....but he wasn't bare handed....he had a metallic tap of sink on each of his hand, he's using them as weapons!!! - Slyv021yrCommentedDo I still have any readers left?
- Slyv022yrCommented"How about this? We can go on a date this Sunday, and get to know each other? And if we feel the chemistry between us, then we can figure out if we would like to continue the relationship or not. Would that be okay?" I said. Look, I know that she's probably not being sincere about her feelings, but is it so bad to be a bit hopeful that this wouldn't go like the show? I mean, this is the real world now, not a show that the people don't have real feelings. She is as real as I am.
- Slyv022yrReplied to 50ShadesOfAss
well,no offense to you but I think I like the style, you know kinda like Deadpool.
Oh! By the way. Remember how I told you that everything that I informed you happened a few weeks back? Well, right now, a certain Fallen Angel is in front of me. It seems it is time she would confess to me and kill me this coming Sunday. - Slyv022yrCommented
well he may need a lot of plot armour.
[Mission has been accepted.] - Slyv023yrCommented
seems like the nichirin blade to me.
[Yes host, after you draw the sword you will be registered as the owner of the sword and a spirit mark is formed on the sword. Except for you others will not be able to lift this sword. There is a chance for the sword to awaken its soul but that is entirely depends on users luck.] - Slyv023yrCommented
you should use metal metal fruit since it is english or if you want whatever the japanese for metal.
Metal-Metal no mi(200/?) - Slyv023yrCommented
i thought silver chariot is about fencing???(p.s. I don't really know about this kind of stuff )is fencing part of swordsmanship?
Armor Lv.1, Sword Launch Lv.1, Great Swordsmanship Lv.5 (LOCKED), Increase SPD Status Lv.7 (LOCKED), Master Swordsmanship Lv. MAX (LOCKED)]" - Slyv023yrPosted
--------------------------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------------------------------- the story itself is good but the spelling and grammar is really bad like seriously. --------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------
- Slyv023yrCommentedCh 1 Volume 1: Chapter 1 (Slight Rework)
- Slyv023yrCommented
ey this is quite good
Stand: Geb Lv.1 - Slyv023yrReplied to Rain_0
Noble Phantasm or your heroes ultimate skill (right?)
This chapter has been deleted. - Slyv023yrReplied to Slyv02
- Slyv023yrPosted
ceritanya dan karakternya bagus tapi beberapa katanya ada yg masih ga nyambung/translatetan ke b.indo(macam:lotus putih,dan host=pembawa acara/biasakan kalau ditranslate langsung dari Inggris artinya jadi semacam pemilik)sisanya udah bagus sebenarnya cuma bahasanya aja sih yg agak bermasalah karena formatnya mirip sama kayak yg Inggris tapi beberapa gak gitu cocok kalo dibuat ke Indonesia.