PizzaPete02

Story is fine, MC is op but I don't mind since that's what I like but the Author's writing style is horrible (not his spelling). The reason I'm saying his writing style is horrible is because he uses "Amplification: Amplification is a writing technique where an author repeats an idea with additional detail, intensity, or imagery to emphasize its importance. It's meant to heighten emotion, tension, or clarity by expanding on the same point in multiple ways." Amplification isn't bad but the author uses amplification way too much, which successfully builds hype but also causes each chapter to feel repetitive and dragged-out, as if the story is recapping rather than moving forward.

"Swords are not wielded that way."

Does anyone know when or if the author stops using modern/cringe slang(like brain rot, aura farming and so on)? I like the concept and the writing quality is good but it's getting really difficult to read. Below is my review: Starts of great, similar to black tech internet café but then 40 chapters in it gets really cringe. the author starts using modern slang (stuff like tweaking) and skipidi toilet humor. it makes it hard to read. plus there are times where he narrates about random stuff for too long. There was an entire chapter dedicated to someone eating ice-cream for the first time.

Interesting concept, world building and power system but I don't like the MC. The MC is stupid and chaotic. He shows of his Kaijin and does not try to do anything to hide them. He is trying to pretend their pupils but basically anyone who sees them goes "That's not a normal pupit" but then they just pretend with the MC that the Kaijin are pupits??? There are other things that annoy me (dialog and how the author writes) but I'm to lazy to talk about it.

The system detects medicine and isolates it because it doesn't know what it is but let's the user get poisoned?

It's not bad, but it's way too slow of a read for me. Any single activity the mc does will take an entire chapter, examples: fishing, cooking and even talking to someone can be an entire chapter. Give it a try but you will have to be patient.

It's a pretty good and interesting story, it was also very funny at times but the harem kinda ruined it for me. 'OH wow the MC is the only person who doesn't get scared of my cold/mean personality, now I like him' 'The MC was nice to me when I was a child and now he is the only thing I can think about, he is my everything' 'When I broke through to the Golden Core realm the MC had to rape me in order to save my life, now I'm in love with him' And so far, all the girls are okay with him having multiple girls or simply ignore it. It does not make any sense. If you're going to put romance in your novel then at least do it well, doing a harem is the most laziest and unoriginal type of romance there is.

Good novel, I recommend it. But it has Big flaws. MC constantly makes stupid decisions. Does not focus on what's important. Does not manage his in well even though it's his job. just so that everyone knows, I have read to chapter 540. Even though user does get rid of his brain tumor, he still makes stupid decisions. his inn gets attacked and employees die because the inn security is pathetically weak and he promises to himself that he will focus on working on the inn then 50 chapters later you are forced to read how he competes in a go kart competition he created for the in and wins for 10 FUCKING CHAPTERS. for the security issue I mentioned, he just finds a temporary solution instead of actually fixing the issue. he doesn't manage the in well. sells crap instead of anything usefull. And it takes him 500 chapter's to reach golden core realm, which is pathetically weak compared to his guests.

It was great in the beginning, interesting cheat and sometimes funny. I'm not going to talk about the faults of the novel that everyone else already talked about. what made me drop the novel is that most of the time, you will read an entire chapter, but nothing actually happens. the author and Mc talk about a lot of shit that does not contribute anything to the story. the author even made a joke about it in one chapter. Most chapters you will be skimming over most of the text and reading a sentence or two that actually matter.

Book is good, the only major flaw that made me stop reading is that the author keeps repeating information you already know CONSTANTLY. One other thing that bothers me is that the author gives too much information on shit that does not add anything to the story or the world building.Basically get ready to skim through paragraphs or skip entire chapters cause some of them will repeat shit that you already know or tell you useless information.