TangyChili

aint no way Bleach verse is lower than One Punch Man

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ohhh ok thanks for clearing that up.

so can he eat more DFs since he's immortal?

Mmmm, I don't know man, you can't fault me for saying it's a generic fanfic and you know it is. Also, I've read many MTLs I can stand reading them despite translation quality, but the fact that the mc is called "the clan" is such a big turn off. It may seem little but names are very important and especially when it's the mc. Other character's names although translated badly I can still get through context, but the mc is an oc. Like maybe you could change the name to something else that sounds like a proper name. However, I don't enjoy reading it with his name like so.

so like are you the author or translator or something? why would my feedback matter to you? btw, I know my phrasing sound very aggressive through text so I'm sorry for that, but I genuinely curious

wait, when was this mentioned? I got to chap 9 before dropping it, I guess I missed it so mb on that.

I dont know how anyone can stand to read this MTL. First of all, the mc of the novel is called "the clan" like that no uppercase no nothing so you get confused reading it. That alone should stop at least 95% of readers, including the few who can stand reading MTLs daily like me. Plus, the story ain't even that good, it's just a generic Chinese DD fanfic where the mc likes to shit on Tang San. The system allows him to steal things and abilities/powers from any universe I think. Additionally, the system has this "hate" points system thingy that even the translator left a TN saying that it doesn't add much to the plot. Also, when the mc steals something from someone, they somehow know that it's the mc who stole it with no explanation. TL;DR just don't read it, even if you're desperate.

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can you give me your discord? (username and code)