ShiroN3K0
Avid reader of Fantasy, Adventure, Action and so on, enjoy reading Xianxia/Wuxia and all in between, want to get to writing a novel i can be proud of, motivation gets in the way a lot though.
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ShiroN3K02mthReplied to NoviceyThanks for the feedback, I agree that the pacing is a bit slow I've been trying to fight the 'Asspull' feeling by slowly developing the MC but unfortunately making that interesting at the same time is a bit hard. We'll that's why I'm writing to improve I guess.
Ch 62 Stone Room - Old Yu- ShiroN3K02mthReplied to NoviceyCh 55 Almost Late - Ascension.
- ShiroN3K05mthReplied to Nikhil_Bannerjee
Ah I changed it a little whole back to make more sense, I missed this instance will update it soon.
"Wood, High Heaven; Water, High Earth; Fire, High Earth; Metal, Low Heaven; Earth, Low Heaven". - ShiroN3K05mthReplied to PussyFateReader
Sorry I hadn't updated it to a the better ranking system, done now.
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His Azure flame is his normal Qi, I did want to make the flame dual coloured but couldn't get a good result and my editing skills aren't quite good enough, I will definitely look in to getting a proper cover drawn in the future though.
Ch 119 Alchemy Demonstration - Detox Pill. - ShiroN3K06mthReplied to MediocreSkaterCh 119 Alchemy Demonstration - Detox Pill.
- ShiroN3K06mthReplied to MediocreSkaterCh 119 Alchemy Demonstration - Detox Pill.
- ShiroN3K06mthReplied to MediocreSkaterCh 120 A Memory Problem - Confidant.
- ShiroN3K06mthReplied to Divindade_FantasmaCh 119 Alchemy Demonstration - Detox Pill.
- ShiroN3K07mthReplied to MediocreSkater
Well I won't say much because of spoilers but... that's not quite right.
"Iris is a country that exists in isolation, other than the grand sea to the north-west the only thing that exists outside Iris is the endless barrens without a single sign of life, Iris is essentially an oasis in a never-ending desert" Wu Zhong explained. - ShiroN3K07mthReplied to GifflarGod
fixed
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[img=In a daze] Strange I fixed it in inkstone but it hasn't updated here.
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It was my brain keeps inserting unnnecessary words lol
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fixed
This paragraph has been deleted. - ShiroN3K07mthReplied to GifflarGodCh 101 Shu He's Conflict II - Black Core.
- ShiroN3K07mthReplied to GifflarGod
My mistake, will fix
Why? Because this technique was something usually unusable by those at Meridian Awakening, it was considered a high-level technique that required a lot of Qi to use! Only with the help of his staff and reserves of Qi can Guo Shi use it! - ShiroN3K07mthReplied to GifflarGod
It's the second to last 'Mortal' stage, the 9th stage is unique, will be detailed more on the coming arcs
8th Stage – 200 – 300 Years - ShiroN3K07mthReplied to GifflarGod
Until they can handle the responsibilities and position of core disciple without help from others, basically just getting used to it.
"You'd think so, right? Chao Shi was so carefree I thought he didn't have any responsibilities…" he rubbed his head to stave off the headache he had growing "Seems the core disciples have collective responsibility to run certain events or do tasks asked of them, and the newer core disciples get burdened with most of it until they can stand on their own". - ShiroN3K07mthReplied to GifflarGod
He was talking about Metal and Earth here, but I forgot to make that clear. Thanks for your other comments will go through and fix stuff later.
'I was the odd one out in the examination in that I had no low mortal or low earth compatibilities, I think it might have been due to the golden flame so I should play safe and not attempt to learn anything of those two elements.' He thought to himself.