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  • Daoist269830
    Daoist2698303 months ago
    Replied to Ag_Amma_Mohamed

    The direct answer is neither an anti-hero nor a hero... although I'm sorry to disappoint you, but he's not a villain.I wanted to show people what the origin of a controversial figure was. All the characters that appear there are meant to be shown as human and fallible as possible.That said, there won't be any romance, no matter how much I might see some expression of it.And more than a villain, he's someone with a mission that's being thwarted by various fantastical characters... all with moral, economic or power-hungry motivations.I promise you'll love the next book because the story expands so much!

  • Daoist269830
    Daoist2698302 years ago
    Replied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139

    honestly no, the idea is older, a webcomic called overlord bob which with logic and common sense (at least at the beginning) defeated without problems most of the heroes... of this I warn you is almost 12 years old.

  • Daoist269830
    Daoist2698302 years ago
    Replied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139

    I missed the process, because I tried to get everything out as fast as I could; I'll make the correction... thanks for the recommendation.

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  • Daoist269830
    Daoist2698302 years ago
    Replied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139

    was a guy who has been battered and beaten for years, in one way or another he hates the kind of injustice established but it's not a vigilante style, it's just revenge where he feels it should be exercised.

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  • Daoist269830
    Daoist2698302 years ago
    Replied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139

    Yes, my English skills are still improving, I think you are right and it is shorter, I wanted to keep a certain poetic sense.

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  • Daoist269830
    Daoist2698302 years ago
    Replied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139

    As I told you, the idea is to show several points of view, in the first book are the origins of several antagonists, the overlord, a deathbringer and a succubus among others, but their stories are more bitter than the common one.

  • Daoist269830
    Daoist2698302 years ago
    Replied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139

    I'm still thinking if I put in each chapter who speaks, but the characters are different and I feel it ruins the immersion a little, but I'll think about it with pleasure.

  • Daoist269830
    Daoist2698302 years ago
    Replied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139

    Some projects, like World Evolution or Death, Overlord saga and some horror stories I have, were done in first and second person because it was necessary to keep the risk and the immersion, because those kinds of stories become predictable when everything is in third person past tense.

  • Daoist269830
    Daoist2698302 years ago
    Replied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139

    a huge apology, the structure of the story was made before I had more experience, but as you progress you will see how the structure of the story changes little by little.

  • Daoist269830
    Daoist2698302 years ago
    Replied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139

    at the time i planned this story yes, it took me a couple of years, now it is finished up to the third book and half of the fourth. what i am doing now is translating it so that more people know about my project.