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honestly no, the idea is older, a webcomic called overlord bob which with logic and common sense (at least at the beginning) defeated without problems most of the heroes... of this I warn you is almost 12 years old.

I missed the process, because I tried to get everything out as fast as I could; I'll make the correction... thanks for the recommendation.

was a guy who has been battered and beaten for years, in one way or another he hates the kind of injustice established but it's not a vigilante style, it's just revenge where he feels it should be exercised.

Yes, my English skills are still improving, I think you are right and it is shorter, I wanted to keep a certain poetic sense.

As I told you, the idea is to show several points of view, in the first book are the origins of several antagonists, the overlord, a deathbringer and a succubus among others, but their stories are more bitter than the common one.

I'm still thinking if I put in each chapter who speaks, but the characters are different and I feel it ruins the immersion a little, but I'll think about it with pleasure.

Some projects, like World Evolution or Death, Overlord saga and some horror stories I have, were done in first and second person because it was necessary to keep the risk and the immersion, because those kinds of stories become predictable when everything is in third person past tense.

a huge apology, the structure of the story was made before I had more experience, but as you progress you will see how the structure of the story changes little by little.

at the time i planned this story yes, it took me a couple of years, now it is finished up to the third book and half of the fourth. what i am doing now is translating it so that more people know about my project.

As such, the character does not seek immortality, he seeks to eliminate the risk generated by the elves who had him enslaved, in this process he shows a little of the whole structure of the epic fantasy lore.