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Make dumbledore more powerful. Love it so far tho. Make someone best hIm up, stories stagnate without a goal. why does he want power? Freedom to explore the Stars? Dimention travel? Fun? The goal is not power, power is the by-product Of reaching hIs goals

Send him to azkahban for being an animagus

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dude wat

Directions for his power to grow Wave and particle manipulation (OP) Basic superman powers. Fly through subs to „super charge“ Dont just make the MC a genius as no pffense but you sre not tony stark smart😁 Develop his character a bit more, more than judt overcoming fesr in a 0 to 100 kinda way That shit takes time. PleaSe no harem, its just lazy writing A bit of a rant Light does not equate to good, light is neither good not bad. Please dont turn him into a character based on the 21 Century. Rape is bad. I dont disagree but tgey are the patron gods Of vikings who raped and pillaged all over. yes thez were also farmers but still.

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