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This is the lamest Mc you have created till now. He is like a slave with how weak he is, everyone can just order him aound. At least with canon time he can do something aside getting manhandled. When you write about a world of might makes right with a weak Mc its just suffering pointlessly and im not sadistic enough for this so im out.
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It doesnt matter if he is human or not, his enemies will not care and they are at least god class so ultimate class is canon fodder. Honestly even in the lightnovel Cao Cao managed to defeat Azazel with fafnir balance breaker twice in his first appearance and the later is at least satan class without fall down dragon spear so to me the Mc is ridiculouslu weak compared to his original self who doesnt have cheatππgo read the light novel to understand how OP Cao Cao is
Another dxd fic huh... I hope this one survives but looking at what the author said about the MC being ultimate class in 4 years while having 3 essence compared to issei the sopposed weakest sekiryuutei going to heavenly dragon class in one year... Yeah i dont think it will go anywhere, so beyππ
Another dxd fic huh... I hope this one survives but looking at what the author said about the MC being ultimate class in 4 years while having 3 essence compared to issei the sopposed weakest sekiryuutei going to heavenly dragon class in one year... Yeah i dont think it will go anywhere, so beyππ
Its a great story just dont go nerfing the Mc or im outπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Its dragon we are talking about any story he writes deserve 5 starπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
As bad as the summary explainedπ π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π π
Not really but i was talking about the escalation because issei in canon has gone from the weakest reincarnated devil to super devil in the top 10 strongest beigns in a year and he was considered the weakest sekiryuutei by Michael and Azazel so i dont know how your going to top that with the Mc's current speed of growth without messing up the storyπ€¨π€¨π§π§
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Sorry bro but what i hate the most is Γ weak Mc and yours is way too weak if even a low class devil has 5 times his stats and if he wants to fight the likes of evil dragons and gods then you have to make him train for a few thousend years or chapters?!!!!!!sorry im out πππ