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So how old was she when she had her daughter?
you mean mondstadt right?
Again he shouldn't be able to know she blushed and looked at the floor wince he is blind
I thought he couldn't see expressions
its a good fanfiction. But I got jebaited by the romance tag. I thought that since the author put it as first tag it will have some place in the story. But as it seemed I was wrong. Apparently somehow author decided that tigress as a romance interest is not good enough and decided to name some unknown characters that might be fml in the future (still undecided). I personaly consider novels without romance to be like a meal without salt. You might think its good but it really is not most of the time.
Isn't it usually yin body that is perfect for demonic cultivation? Yang represents fire and yin cold so in most Wuxia novels I've read yang is not good for the demonic path.
You are saying that as if guys weren't obsessive at all. As if you'd let your girlfriend have another boyfriend besides you. In fact, guys are even more obsessive than girls.
Great chapter author, keep it up, and don't worry about those kids complaining. I always wondered why people have problems with Yuri in a harem, it's as if they are insecure or something idk.
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Lul what about all those translated fics all around webnovel. It's not just Chinese that steal bro.
And where would he hide those cannons? Inside his pockets?
Guts' gigachad sword
I think that is only a matter of perspective. What might be evil for some might be good for others. In the end, there is no good or evil there just is or isn't. So the question of are humans evil? It doesn't matter as it would change nothing.
Yeah, I noticed after reading the whole chapter, but there is still a mix of both povs in this paragraph as it is told in 3rd person but switched to 'my back' which is first person.
Can you stop switching points of view mid-sentence? Either write a whole paragraph in the first person or third person. But stop using both at the same time it is extremely annoying.
Well, I would certainly want to see some experimental results about not being able to kill them without magic. What about some hydraulic press vs werewolf? Surely you can't survive being crushed to meat paste right?
That sounds like something a villain would say to justify their lack of morality on their path to power.
Can't lose it if you never had it, right?