What's wrong with his cheat, and now you want to turn him into a ghoul? You'll probably drop that soon as well. How about you sit down and run through a 100 chapter base plan so you have a general idea for the story.

Jesus, this is horrible to read with all the grammatical errors. Please use grammarly. It's a free program that will fix all these mistakes.

He is the smartest*

Thank God you're back. Again, I'm sorry about your mom passing, but this is one of my fav fics.

Please stop saying his name every sentence we get it you established who he is you don't need to state from whose perspective we are reading from each new sentence.

Maybe stop reading the comments and getting so worked up over people who don't matter. Write the story how you want.

A boy this author is just brain dead.

Sorry for your loss, I really enjoyed this story. If you want to continue, I think a lot of people would like that. Again I'm sorry you lost your mom that's tough.

is anyone else missing the first 20 chapters?

is it just me are all the chapters deleted besides 2 of them?

Whatever makes you the happiest to keep writing, man. The story is good, and I'm enjoying it. Please keep writing.

It means she would look younger longer so say by age 64 she would still look to be in her 30's

Edit it please

Still didn't fix it lol 23 days later

April fools?

What happened to the calm and cold Nojiko she was accustomed to***

D** Not C

glasses***

Taught**

Taught*