Haraldi
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wrong Honda
Hey, Been enjoying The fic so far but try to avoid using same sentence over and over again, pretty sure i have seen that last part multiple times already, *Kaizen doing this and people glaze that* we get it Kaizen helps and people appreciate it. If you really want, make it a dialogue or something More than Kaizen helped, people like Kaizen comment.
Root = doesnt exist on paper. You have a "Prodigy" Kid whos name everyone have heard (Will hear), imagine said kid going missing without a word. Raises hell lot of questions. Why would hokage allow promising student fall into root before being active ninja and thats after chuunin promotions when genin team is fully disbanded and at that point Danzo most likely can only offer a spot. it makes much more sense to nab no name no face brats who nobody misses or have heard of. (If we are talking about kindapping part ofc)
pretty sure seen this plotline before in *h*... anime before
is the metal made of medal i wonder 🤭
sunrise on FF, sadly abandoned 61k words.oldest kamado sibling insert (not tanjiro). Fast pased If i dont remember wrong, a prodigy got hashira rank fast...
it's allways funny to see people try to use our earthly common sense on FICTION like OP, Naruto or almost any other anime world.
SUSna
story died before it had time to begin