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"Everyone, form a line!" Usami ordered, to which the kids entered a line where one stood in front of another, "No no, the other line! Vertical line!" She corrected, to which the kids now stood side by side facing Usami who had a smile on her face, "Good good!" She nodded.- Haraldi9dReplied to THE_LIVING_PARADOX
wrong Honda
The boy's name was Honda. Honda had been a childhood friend of Eiji's, so he didn't mind helping him out from time to time, but his requests were now getting excessive. - Haraldi17dCommented
Hey, Been enjoying The fic so far but try to avoid using same sentence over and over again, pretty sure i have seen that last part multiple times already, *Kaizen doing this and people glaze that* we get it Kaizen helps and people appreciate it. If you really want, make it a dialogue or something More than Kaizen helped, people like Kaizen comment.
As the session concluded and the students began to file out of the dojo, Kaizen chose to remain behind. He took the time to assist some of his classmates who had struggled with the exercises, offering tailored advice and encouragement. His friendly nature and sincere investment in their improvement created a positive atmosphere, strengthening bonds and building mutual respect among the group. - Haraldi18dReplied to CruelReality
Root = doesnt exist on paper. You have a "Prodigy" Kid whos name everyone have heard (Will hear), imagine said kid going missing without a word. Raises hell lot of questions. Why would hokage allow promising student fall into root before being active ninja and thats after chuunin promotions when genin team is fully disbanded and at that point Danzo most likely can only offer a spot. it makes much more sense to nab no name no face brats who nobody misses or have heard of. (If we are talking about kindapping part ofc)
Kaizen's strategy was clear: showcase his talent to its fullest without revealing his most guarded secrets. He recognized that by demonstrating his skills, he would attract the attention of instructors and influential figures within the academy. This attention would afford him access to better training, more resources, and the kind of rigorous challenges that would accelerate his growth. The faster he grew stronger, the sooner he could navigate and master this new world. - Haraldi18dReplied to EnderPL
- Haraldi1mthReplied to SmYzCh 17 Chapter 17
- Haraldi2mthCommented
pretty sure seen this plotline before in *h*... anime before
Lily stared at the bottle for a moment. "Of course, one glass won't hurt." - Haraldi3mthCommented
is the metal made of medal i wonder 🤭
This paragraph has been deleted. - Haraldi5mthReplied to No_Name_Passerby
sunrise on FF, sadly abandoned 61k words.oldest kamado sibling insert (not tanjiro). Fast pased If i dont remember wrong, a prodigy got hashira rank fast...
[Demon Slayer] - Haraldi6mthReplied to Asvakdravus
it's allways funny to see people try to use our earthly common sense on FICTION like OP, Naruto or almost any other anime world.
The two babies were flailing their chubby arms at each other, their little fists swinging wildly as they wobbled on unsteady feet. Their faces were scrunched up in anger, and they emitted tiny, high-pitched cries as they fought. Kai managed to land a weak hit on Kid, causing him to stumble backward and fall onto his diapered bottom. The victorious baby let out a triumphant squeal, but it was short-lived as the fallen baby quickly got back up and resumed the fight with renewed vigor. They continued their struggle, both determined to emerge as the winner in this tiny battle of wills until they were both exhausted and fell asleep. - Haraldi6mthReplied to DiscountChangelingCh 10 Scarred Timeline
- Haraldi6mthCommented'Eh- no need to worry. It isn't like a muggle-born is getting sorted into Slytherin any time soon. At least, not after the last fiasco.' He shrugged, thoughts going back to his dreams of grandeur. Dueling, fighting, and sublime spell work: he wanted it all.
- Haraldi6mthCommentedCh 5 Midnight Excursions
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- Haraldi7mthCommented
SUSna
'Susan Bones, niece of Amelia Bones, the director of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement. Hannah Abbot... Susna's friend.' Alex thought he didn't know much about them as they were just side characters in the original story. Amelia died in book 7... or somewhere around the time when Voldemort started to seize power. - Haraldi7mthCommented
story died before it had time to begin
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