Vezton
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Vezton3mthPostedI am absolutely loving this story! Even though there are only seven chapters, each one has captivated me from start to finish. The way the plot is unfolding is incredibly engaging, and I find myself eagerly anticipating what will happen next. Your talent is shining through in every word, and I sincerely hope that you continue to write and develop this amazing story. It would be such a shame if you were to drop it, as I am truly invested in the characters and their journey. Keep up the fantastic work, and I eagerly await the upcoming chapters to see how everything unfolds!
- Vezton9mthCommented
Helmeppo
Coincidentally, at that very moment, a slender, average-sized young man with a distinct cleft chin and a crown of light blonde hair entered the restaurant. It was Helmeppo, and he took a seat near the front. Addressing Rika's mother, he callously revealed his true intentions, admitting that he never intended to release Zoro and that Zoro's execution was scheduled for the following day. A sinister chuckle escaped from Helmeppo's lips, echoing through the room. - Vezton9mthCommented
Rika’s mother
Following their conversation, Isshiki and Nami proceeded to a restaurant, coincidentally owned by Rika and her mother. Ever since he awakened and acquired the Isshiki Otsutsuki template, even the events that had faded from his memory over time became vividly clear, as if he had witnessed them in the anime just the day before. - Vezton9mthCommented
Rika
Following their conversation, Isshiki and Nami proceeded to a restaurant, coincidentally owned by Rika and her mother. Ever since he awakened and acquired the Isshiki Otsutsuki template, even the events that had faded from his memory over time became vividly clear, as if he had witnessed them in the anime just the day before. - Vezton1yrCommented"Tell me more about Yun Che."
- Vezton1yrReplied to Esgod
I don't have a clue. The author has not said that. So hopefully there will be more to come.
When using the life simulator, he would simulate from the day he started the simulation. - Vezton1yrCommented
This system reminds me of a novel called Lord of the Mysteries - Fate Emperor in which the Mc has a similar ability.
When using the life simulator, he would simulate from the day he started the simulation. - Vezton1yrReplied to IMMORT_AL
That’s funny 😂
Mike walked towards Clark and stood in front of his face, and when Clark looked away, Mike smiled inwardly but said, "May I have a dance?" - Vezton1yrCommented
The knights
I calmly walked out as Igris and knight were beating the shit out of the mages their blood-covered face was really satisfying to watch as both of them stopped as I stood in front of the mages who were coughing out the blood glaring at me through their swollen faces. - Vezton1yrReplied to iknowsomethingnewEND CHAPTER---
- Vezton1yrCommented"Neither is what your dad did, and he's still the #2 Pro Hero," Horizon completely shuts her up.
- Vezton1yrCommented"Oh, then you should talk to him about it," Juzo recommends.
- Vezton1yrCommented
The very first anime I watched was Zatch Bell when I was like 6
Blake decided to talk to Mike and get advice on these genres. He asked what should be the first anime to watch, what genre should it be, and similar questions, and as a result, he decided on Toradora anime. [EN: The first anime I watched. It's a series that I really like, from the plot to the characters, and it's the anime that makes me watch more anime.] - Vezton1yrReplied to KingCroSs
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Crap. This didn't look good. "Everything," she hissed. "You're going to tell me everything Marie did to you." - Vezton3yrCommentedCh 18 chapter 15 The opening of the curtains
- Vezton3yrCommentedCh 136 Chapter 136
- Vezton3yrReplied to Vezton
And I’m not saying he should be put on same level as them either. It’s just that threatening the mc could have consequences that she wouldn’t like in the future
"I accept" - Vezton3yrCommented
Just putting it out there but if he was listening to what Nyx just said wouldn’t he realized that she couldn’t harm him and why wouldn’t that go for the “ Mother “ too ? I would have imagined that she would have tried too if Nyx couldn’t do it? Right?... He’s obviously put their for a reason. And neither of the 2 primordial gods could stop his soul from entering their universe/world. But I do like the story so far and appreciate the hard work you’re putting into writing it!💯
"I accept"