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f3f312dReplied to chh_ota_beamOnly in countrys with bad food laws.
I was taller, obviously. I had better be too! Cadbury has been making me chug raw eggs every morning since my growing pains began - I'd be livid if I hadn't put on height.- f3f312dReplied to KexKexKex
Snakes fans need to touch some grass.
"You might as well take all the points at once, because every time you speak, I'll respond right back," Rose replied, smiling broadly, her hands behind her head. Her incredibly blue eyes stared at Snape with clear amusement dancing in them. - f3f326dReplied to uchiha_satoruCh 6 Chapter 5.5 Sticks & Stones
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Like the force? literally just blame it on the force? like…
Carl paused trying to find the best way to explain. " well I guess first thing to say, I'm not from this reality." - f3f31mthCommented
ice on beer?
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Sorry man but i refuse to donate to a GpT story.
Buy me a Cofee: https://ko-fi.com/saffronknight - f3f32mthCommented
I swear people act as if we asked to be born or something. Most parents have kids for selfishness. If they were really that bothered to make the world better they would have adopted. You don’t owe what you didn’t ask for.
Leon knew he was being too disrespectful and shouldn't speak like this to someone who had carried him for 9 months. - f3f32mthCommented
Just no so early in the story. I don’t know of a single one who didn’t become awfull after the kids.
[Vote: Children] - f3f32mthCommented
Midnight in paris is great.
He continued, listing each project with practiced ease: "Seth Rogen's got a dramedy called '50/50' in the mix, could be a good laugh. Then there's 'Like Crazy,' an independent romance from an independent newcomer. And even an international offer – 'Midnight in Paris' from a French studio, intriguing premise..." - f3f32mthReplied to Naruto420
Back in the day people hated Keanu. Like there wasn’t a day that they didn’t insult him.
What Sean didn't know was that Lucas's days on set, surrounded by the likes of Leonardo DiCaprio, Ken Watanabe, and Tom Hardy and the others, had unwittingly polished his social skills and fostered a newfound confidence. The constant exposure to the celebrity spotlight, once daunting, had become a training ground. He learned to navigate the public eye, his initial awkwardness replaced by a measured ease. - f3f32mthCommented
From the misogynistic brand favored by men with fragile egos? I 100 percent would expect it 😆
Leaving Cary's icy domain, Vincent cast a concerned glance at Lucas. "I'm so sorry, Lucas," he said, his voice laced with regret. "I didn't expect such...harshness from D&G. Truly disappointing." - f3f32mthCommented
I mean. A stylist who uses dolce is not someone you want anyway.
"I'm afraid my generosity has its limits, Mr. Smith," Cary interrupted, his voice cold as the mountain air. He then turned to Lucas, "We only dress stars, darling. Perhaps try your local thrift store next time." - f3f32mthCommented
This story feels more AI generated by the day.
The wheels of the plane kissed the tarmac at Salt Lake City Airport, a gentle sigh escaping Lucas as the engines whined down. He unbuckled, excitement bubbling in his chest as the scent of anticipation hung heavy in the air. The Sundance Film Festival was a mere breath away, and even the sterile airport buzzed with a creative energy. Movie posters plastered the walls, whispers of upcoming premieres danced on the wind, and a palpable sense of artistic camaraderie thrummed beneath the fluorescent lights. - f3f33mthReplied to SolwWhile after Jiang Xu sat back in his place, his gaze was quickly drawn to the unremarkable girl sitting at the last position in the first row.detailTaking advantage of the beauty being poor, fooling her into being my girlfriendUrban · Peace every year
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Challenging moment? You have a system that tells you everything...
Things became white-hot as the competition reached its peak 12 days later, when Alex faced a challenging moment. - f3f34mthCommented
The story is becoming worst each chapter. at least the first ones were edited and trying ( and failing) to be written by a person. but the last chapters are clearly copy pasted from a AI generated chat. Not even a pay one....Really disappointed.
The headlines varied, but the contents of the articles carried the same theme, they were surprised that a new, upcoming young fellow like Alex would overreach and dare to pair himself up to the level of a young second generation like David. - f3f34mthCommented
this feels like AI generated :/
Back at his apartment, Alex wasted no time. He was determined to learn more than he knew about stocks and financial markets, to understand what he had missed him for so long. The system on his phone had given him an opportunity, and he intended to make the most of it. - f3f34mthReplied to lamortnoir974
Try to look for a script drama and comedy writing. Only a chapter so you see how a good flow dialog works. Of course don’t copy it. Scripts and novels are different. But is good to see realistic dialogs and analyze conversantion flows. Also don’t be scared of use words like he said, he felt, he screamed, etc. Dialogs tags (how they are called) are bothersome to write but for the readers they are good to keep things realistica. Hope that it helps. And about spelling errors, try using chat got only for grammar. ‘It normally works pretty well. But don’t use it for writing, is really obvios when you use it for that.
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