I haven't checked this in a LONG while and wow... That kiss was such a cute scene. I also really love the overthinking bit, that was a nice touch. Seeing that strong girl overthinking about their relationship is pretty great. Good chapter right here, author 👍

Ack, my heart. Thanks for this, the chapter lifted my mood quite a lot.

So cute, oh my gosh. SHIP!!! I ship them so hard! Hysteria is so freaking cute, wow...

Why thank me? Well whatever. You're welcome, I guess?

Oh yeah, right... I see... Ok yeah, that makes sense. I was wondering why Andy didn't say it but that totally makes sense. Uugggghhh, why do all your characters make senses???

Ok, on a more serious note though, I'm sorry for saying all that stuff about pressure. Just do what you can do for now, I know you're busy and all. I'm sorry. Not taking back that I hate the ending though, I still absolutely loathe it. Hahaha. *grin* I'm gonna miss reading this, actually. No more story I gotta read daily. It's a great story, really. And I'm really glad that AT LEAST ONE of my ships sailed. Hahaha, still irritated by it all. Great job here though, really. I absolutely loved this and it made me feel so much feelings (anger, as of right now. and sadness because this book is over) I'm gonna be focusing on ranting on your other story now, so be prepared! MWAHAHAHAHA!!! (I'm mostly kidding, but I MIGHT actually do it. Who knows?) Love this book, seriously. One of my favorites for sure.

F*CK THAT ENDING! THAT'S PLAIN BULLSH*T AND I F*CKING HATE IT! AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!! WHYYY???? FREAKING HECK, MAN!!! WHO THE F*CK ENDS A BOOK LIKE THAT??? AAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!! Freaking heck, dude... Why you do this to me?? Hahaha... Ughhh, my heart can't take all this pain!! I hate this end, I just do. It's a freaking HUGE cliffhanger and I absolutely loathe it. I really do. Just know that I have high expectations for that book two because of how you ended it here, yeah? I'm gonna torture you with pressure now.

I don't think I'm part of that silent sect anymore ever since my first comment. I've freaking ranted here already. And no, I'm not done being irritated at that end. Nope, I'm still f*cking pissed.

NO F*CKING WAY!!! DON'T YOU DARE!!! (I know, it isn't exactly the end since there's a book two and stuff but...) F*CK THIS! I'M NOT F*CKING ACCEPTING THIS! YOU DON'T F*CKING END IT HERE, NOPE!

Yeah, me too. Me too.

That's good, yeah. Make a name for yourself. That IS good. Hah... I hate that it makes so much sense. I hate it. F*ck, I'm sad. (and slightly irritated because my family have sort of been disturbing my reading. mostly sad though, all because of you author. all because of you...)

Yes, I get it. You are. You're just trying to keep a living by giving up the two things you love most, your identity and your love. It honestly makes a lot of sense, at least on her point of view. I wish Andy told her about being rich and all. Would've helped Erika in choosing to come out...

Oh wait, but she didn't know that Andy was rich. She didn't actually know about the capabilities of her partner so she obviously had a hard time seeing a future without her family. Ugh, I hate that. Knowing everything in a story doesn't mean the characters know it too. Urgh, how irritating.

So? You can't change how you are, now can you? You're not gonna be able to rely much on your family anyway if they die, you're gonna have to live your life alone someday anyway. So, you might as well do what you want and enjoy your life being yourself than just keep hiding who you are. I know, I can only say this because I haven't actually experienced it first hand. She's young and she probably isn't ready to live alone yet. She still can't think of her future without her family in the picture, it makes sense. But man... she had Andy too. HAD! She HAD Andy with her to go while going through the coming out. Andy would've supported her all the way. Gosh...

Well, ar least you admit it. That's a start, I guess. Gotta do something about that cowardice of yours though. You only grow older and time isn't infinite. Do something about it or you'll for sure regret that. I'm telling you, if you two f*cking meet again and you still haven't grown... I'm just gonna go up to you and just freaking kil-- Hah... just do something about it, yeah?

Leaving it to destiny?? Hah, don't f*cking trust that thing, man! That never gets you anywhere. Do something or nothing's gonna happen, that's what I think. Even if you two meet, if you haven't grown, nothing is gonna even change. It's just gonna be a wreck again...

I hate that she came to that conclusion. She's brave to break up with her, but I wish she used that bravery in coming out instead. Hah... what else can I say that isn't part of me ranting about how this hurts? Nothing? Ok, guess I'll stop this here then. Hah.....

AAAAAHHHHHH AND NOW WE GO BACK TO THE BREAK UP!!! Uurrrrggggghhhhhh... Why, author, why??? I seriously swear you're torturing me. Freaking heck!

You torture me, author. You just torture me. That's all you're doing, torturing me. I'm sure of it! You're freaking torturing me right now. Ugh... I'm irritated by you, author. I actually sort of am. Uugggghhh... Why is this book so goddamn sad? It's cute and all, but it's so goddamn sad too! Ugh!

SOMEONE SAID IT'S A GREAT CHAPTER, F*CK. Ugh. I want to say that too!! I want to freaking fangirl about my ship finally sailing and just-- Ugh. I want to do all that but, I'm too saddened by the break up. I'm still freaking saddened by it. My heart is just broken now for Andy, gosh. Why'd you make me this sad, author? And then right after that, flood me with all the cute stuff I've been waiting for when I can't react to it because I'm too sad??? UGH, gosh...