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Geraldbridge

Geraldbridge

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2019-05-24 JoinedGlobal
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  • Geraldbridge
    Geraldbridge3yr
    Posted

    XD I guess I gotta boost my own book a little, not a professional writer just someone who enjoys writing them there might be a couple of typos sorry dyslexia is hunting me hope you guys enjoy the story thought

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    started out new with a new account
    Sci-fi · Geraldbridge
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  • Geraldbridge
    Geraldbridge3yr
    Commented

    Writing might need a little improvement but the story is really good you can fell the emotions of the chars and get right sucked into it

    Ch 1 Desislaf Rimet (1 of 3)
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    The Slime Farmer
    Fantasy · Jin_Daoran
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  • Geraldbridge
    Geraldbridge3yr
    Posted

    It's a funny little story can get a bit boring in between but a good story to read if you wait for updates can't give 5 stars since it's a story similar to a lot of other but overall a good quality

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    I Reincarnated As A Stick
    Fantasy · TrueDawn
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  • Geraldbridge
    Geraldbridge3yr
    Posted

    Very well written the story sucks you right into it and it is a original one Def a must read book and way to underrated one. Should have a lot more comments and power stones

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    Endless Journey: Infinite Realms
    Fantasy · kcgrabin
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  • Geraldbridge
    Geraldbridge3yr
    Replied to Geraldbridge

    Best way to improve one's written skill is to to read other books make longer sentences and describe maybe more of the feelings imagin yourself as the Mc

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    The Ultimate Guild
    Games · Daoistlover95
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  • Geraldbridge
    Geraldbridge3yr
    Posted

    i stopped reading by the first chapter maybe go over it again and make it a little bit more interesting right from the start it's like the mc is just babbling some boring random stuff. and please be careful of not making a story to similar to already existing ones

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    The Ultimate Guild
    Games · Daoistlover95
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  • Geraldbridge
    Geraldbridge3yr
    Replied to Geraldbridge

    Wish you the best luck for it 😊

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    night sky
    Teen · yesica_rodriguez
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  • Geraldbridge
    Geraldbridge3yr
    Posted

    You should describe things and feelings more detailed specially at the beginning it seems rushed maybe go over that again Storrs might have potential but for me it's just another way to Op main char a couple of limits specially at the beginning would have been nice might check it out later again if things have changed and developed better

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    Mana Weaver
    Fantasy · Seb_Onward
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  • Geraldbridge
    Geraldbridge3yr
    Posted

    I didn't read further even taught it might be an interesting storyline but please start over again put more info in describe things better don't just jump from mothers death to a random country in Europe explain better how she went there what got left from her mother and so on

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    night sky
    Teen · yesica_rodriguez
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