Most martyrs are not martyrs because of destructive acts. They are martyrs because of constructive acts that call into question the legitimacy of the ruling party. So this description is flawed and prejudiced against dissent.

Ves always attracting trouble plot is getting old. I hope the author does something different next time.

Look guys let's be honest Ves is not hero nor is he always right. Jennifer is not a villain nor is she always wrong. They just simply disagree with each other about protection. Jannzi doesn't hate Ves. She just doesn't trust him and that's fair.

I can't cosign this. While I am fine with killing ghanso. Torturing his soul is just beyond the pale maybe even demonic.

Tu shan because I will always like adventures more than actions. Also who cares about being the strongest if you don't develop proper life experiences. Sometimes being in a bubble can make out of touch with reality and I don't want that.

I want her to lose and learn from all of the experiences she has had during the fox hunting festival. She really doesn't have to be the strongest right now at this moment. After all she's only about 2 years old.

This is a direct reflection of Ves's leadership skills. Sure he knows how to run a multi-sector business, but that doesn't make him a competent leader of a brand new clan. His lack of ability to form meaningful, trustworthy, and long-term relationships with other people shows Ves's lack of character and manhood. Man is built off of respect and respect is forged through personal genuine sacrifice. This is how a man is supposed to build trustworthy subordinates.

I am kind of bored by the narrow scope of this story when comes to technology and who builds it. Everything is focused on mech designers who basically are allowed a monopoly to build out all of the current society's technological innovation.

Ves you are a simp. Alpha males always have options and demand constant competitiveness from their female partners.

Ves you are a simp. Alpha males always have options and demand constant competitiveness from their female partners.

The Larkinson Clan needs to diversify there money making and resource acquisition away from the LMC.Mainly so that they are no longer living off of Ves's accomplishments, but there own. This will make them sustainable for the long term. The proof of this is the Nyxian gap ambush by the Allidus Alliance. Ves was nearly annihilated along with his crew and the clan cannot leave it's fate in Ves hands.

This battle was too time consuming, too destructive, and too stupid. I hope Ves learns to curbed his greed and not rush and take unnecessary and costly risk with few rewards. " Don't go chasing waterfalls, listen to the rivers."

I am going to guess he's talking about Cassandra Breyer. She's on the scarlet rose.

Courage may be a virtue but violence is not the only way to bring it out. This test was unnecessarily bloody and violent whether they are courageous or traumatized later on is still 50/50.

This is a bald face lie. There is no way humans are the only species in the galaxy willing to be altruistic and pass on their legacy to their young. No species would have even gotten off their home planet without this practice. This is just plain old human supremacy.

After coming so far in this story I've come to despise the predatory mindset of older professionals. I always noticed an exploitative thought process when it comes between the old and the young. I think the ability to extend the lives of more accomplished professionals by hundreds of years has turned the old into vampires who devour the vitality and innovative intelligence of the youth to strengthen themselves. This has me to wonder if older mech designers intentionally destroy or use up the potential of younger less accomplished mech designers. I hope not.[img=recommend]

If Ves thinks he can forcefully separate Gloriana from her family. He better think again because that woman and her family are a packaged deal. Marriage is a joining of bloodlines, families, and cultures to create a new legacy.

After reading this story to this point. I have come to the conclusion that the MTA and the CFA have a parent to child relationship with the rest of humanity. Historically, this type of relationship has always resulted in the exploitation and abuse of the so-called children. I hope some among humanity aren't content with such a relationship.

I agree with Ves. Sometimes you need to practice a certain amount of selfishness in order to, insure the prosperity, and survival of you and your family. This is simply the God given right of every man and woman. Enough Said.

I really don't like this ultra pro-human ideology. It meshes too much with European genocidal expansion. Basically, calling all aliens savages and claiming humans are the chosen species to rule the universe. If the author is honest, this will only end one way with the mutual destruction of all competing species. Conquest is not a strength. It is a weakness.