Literalmente un payaso
Esta bien but the actions he did with artoria make no sense to his character of someone older and tired of life That is forced, he did it out of nowhere and without any real reason, there was nothing to justify those actions, I think that if you want to get closer to the girls, you should make them come closer by themselves
it does not make sense the interaction between the teachers and ren felt too forced, why would I go looking for him? that does not fit with the character of the grandfather also where was miu could you have done exactly the same without having forced it, it simply does not make any sense that he went to look for him and that he also knocked him out
I do not think that the lilibrllilibrl that the people in the chat have to be the original TO LOVE RU It should be the story or the life that the protagonist himself has lived in this life, he could also have cameos and it is also possible to make that story a source in order to see the future
sorry too rushed there was no development in the romance or love of the characters you really just did a vague summary That only makes the harem this void of development and real love in the end the women of Rimuru will not add anything important to the story in regards to romance, parodies have extended this to Give a good romance and not just be "out of nowhere I fell in love with Rimuru"