Mateus_Novaes

"The story is really good, but chapters 137 and 138 totally threw me off. The plot twist was impressive, but it ended up ruining my expectations for a romance with Ariana. I expected her to be one of the few trustworthy people in the middle of all this chaos. Maybe it’s just a matter of personal preference, but I didn't like such an abrupt change. Even knowing that the protagonist isn't her father, I would have preferred it if the author had developed her character by having her distance herself from her mother and her biological father's family. That shift in loyalty would have been a much more satisfying path for the romance." translation using google

It's uncomfortable to read without adding paragraphs.

I expected a harem.

Please keep translating into English and posting here.

harem?

??

Good book, but in many parts it is very frustrating, especially in the matter of abuse, where he could have put an end to the criminal family at the root to avoid unnecessary problems, if he had investigated the whole family from the beginning. Another issue is his insistence on maintaining anonymity when it was not necessary, especially regarding the creation of Minecraft. However, when he developed an artificial intelligence, he went around showing it to many people without the same concern. In addition, his mindset, for someone who has reincarnated, should be at least a little more mature and less naive. That said, I liked the book for not having too many unnecessary clichés, as happens in many books on the site, and I also support the inclusion of his aunt in the harem. Overall, I enjoyed the book — keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapters.