sweet chapter hope we find out his chosen onE!!

thank you for continuing good sir!!

Thank you for a wonderful returned chapter but I want Jake back in danmachi with bell and crew and focus on making them stronger or better aleast cause that the main focus of your story right?

Thank for the lesson on the village. It good to realize it.

nice chapter man! keep up the good work! also glad you got a new rival for Eric to grow from like you plan! i know he a side char but it good Eric got someone he know and relate to then being single out as the chosen one which I find kind of boring but you do you man.

what a story! thank for the read! love it!

or maybe i got it right (smirk)

this is great ! sad about cheating wife

like the story but got confuse on the mc backstory a little great started

Awesome chapter love the dialogue with his training.

I love the story and the progressive of the character your mc is that he given a gift but not something op lol hope kaz stay human then realized he can change race which make the story full again I lose interest in it.... Anyway great stuff!!!

Love the realistic approach to storytelling and the unique direction it heading!!! Even just looking at mc and mother relationship is awesome.

Wonderful! Yamcha! Wonderful!!!