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I don’t think he will, but you could have seen this coming If you remember his law he’s studying is a form of faith

I did enjoy this book and it starts off really strong with good character build progression, but unfortunately the further it’s goes the faster and less developed the book gets. It has potential but it felt like the writer just wanted to make an ending so jumped from the middle stopped building the world and characters threw in some fight scenes the bam end the book. It has no good explanation albeit I can guess the end, but author lost all creativity and just wanted to end this novel.

So much of it, the writer dropping the ball soo much this month it’s getting really annoying

This entire chapter is repeating the same thing over and over and over again

Some of these last few chapters keep repeating them selves

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Julian would probably be best for his law of sovereign/ruler by putting him in the eyes of the people