Scribblez
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Scribblez2yrReplied to FluffiaBeardThe basic premise I had is that unless he has a replacement body he'll just get forcibly sent back to the store.
Yuuta wasn't used to the limited movement that the mannequin body has; though he was having a hard time adjusting to his new body, he was set on helping the injured little girl. He went to the room where he found the mannequin and he grabbed a bucket and some rags. In front of the entrance he was a bit hesitant to open it because he might get sent flying again, as he open the doors he was ok and nothing happened; The store was in the middle of a lush and green forest with towering trees at every glance with little light passing through the leaves of said trees. After wandering a couple of minutes around the store he found a lake nearby and he filled the bucket with water, and headed back.- Scribblez2yrReplied to FluffiaBeard
Wow didn't expect someone would still read my novel I wrote and completely forgot because I'm busy doing some irl stuff XD But thank you for pointing out some of the mistakes and I was planning to revamp some of it cause I lost my notebook where I wrote the basic premise of the story and I'm extremely grateful that you took the time to read it.
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