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How about adding Taylor Swift as a love interest

Dropped ?

I think adding a bit more tension and drama between Ethan and Haley will make the story more engaging and emotionally rich. It’ll create a stronger dynamic and give the characters more depth. I’m still new to writing, so I’m using ChatGPT to help me refine my ideas and improve my storytelling. For the next chapters, I plan to focus on Ethan’s journey in the little leagues, showing his dedication and growth as a player. I’ll also introduce Alex’s birth, which will bring a new layer to the family dynamics. Haley’s reaction to Alex and the bond forming between Alex and Ethan will be a major point of tension, adding more complexity to her character and her feelings of rivalry. After that, I’m thinking of including a time skip to some of Ethan’s baseball matches. These scenes will highlight his progress and dedication, with a few pivotal moments that showcase how far he’s come. At the same time, I’ll continue to explore the sibling relationships and how they evolve over time.

you could try indifference and insensitive to the main cast like he dosen't care about any of there feelings and is just blunt with them like i know the main cast has many flaws and he could you know maybe point it, kinda like dede.

First Smallville fanfic that caught my attention, and it didn't disappoint!.I love how the story explores the relationships between Clark, Lex, and the other key characters in new and unexpected ways. The writing style is smooth, and the pacing is just right, making it a truly enjoyable read

I mean in the anime Tobirama did mention thatminato's flying Raijin was better than his and also minto was able to make a lot of cool jutsu's with the FR and also able to repel a tailed beast bomb

hey man sorry might see my comments a lot often but its been what like 5 months since your last update just wanted to know if its dropped or not if now would love to read more chapters..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................yeah just wanted an update on the status thats all

Hey man it's been three months been waiting a long time for a new chapter at least us if it's discontinued or just taking a while for the new chapter, again sorry if you are facing any crisis don't know about it but if not just tell if there will be any new chapters or not!!!!!!!!!!!!