love_Ahir

Thank you for the chapter! 😀 I really enjoyed this one—the story keeps getting better with each update. Looking forward to the next chapter!

This was an excellent read! I truly enjoyed the way you developed the story and kept the pacing engaging. Your writing style is captivating, and I can't wait to see where the plot goes next. Please continue to post more chapters—I'm eager to read more!

Thank you so much for the new chapter! I was really worried it had been discontinued. I'm eagerly awaiting the next update!

Dropped ?

How about adding Taylor Swift as a love interest

Dropped ?

I think adding a bit more tension and drama between Ethan and Haley will make the story more engaging and emotionally rich. It’ll create a stronger dynamic and give the characters more depth. I’m still new to writing, so I’m using ChatGPT to help me refine my ideas and improve my storytelling. For the next chapters, I plan to focus on Ethan’s journey in the little leagues, showing his dedication and growth as a player. I’ll also introduce Alex’s birth, which will bring a new layer to the family dynamics. Haley’s reaction to Alex and the bond forming between Alex and Ethan will be a major point of tension, adding more complexity to her character and her feelings of rivalry. After that, I’m thinking of including a time skip to some of Ethan’s baseball matches. These scenes will highlight his progress and dedication, with a few pivotal moments that showcase how far he’s come. At the same time, I’ll continue to explore the sibling relationships and how they evolve over time.

you could try indifference and insensitive to the main cast like he dosen't care about any of there feelings and is just blunt with them like i know the main cast has many flaws and he could you know maybe point it, kinda like dede.

First Smallville fanfic that caught my attention, and it didn't disappoint!.I love how the story explores the relationships between Clark, Lex, and the other key characters in new and unexpected ways. The writing style is smooth, and the pacing is just right, making it a truly enjoyable read