Harem tends to focus too much on catching girls than story. I'd prefer only one person for romance ,You have more time to focus on developing the relationship and story time.

4 sure ,this sounds like a banger.

The chaps end a little bit early ,but thats just personal preference. It's great and some of the negative comments are probably because this re-translation just barely caught up with the other one before it dropped.

Last I remember the price was 50k Belly ,50k times 100 is 5m so I think its good.

Here's some feedback. I enjoy the book. has a nice vibe and not too many errors. I personally enjoy this book over the other two I've read ,but thats just me liking one piece and pokemon more than naruto.

it's not that hard ,if mana can cancel out cursed energy ,which is the energy manifestation of negative emotions ,then mana is just the energy manifestation of positive emotions. If this isn't how it works ,Big L.

lizards are floor 3-4 and frog shooters are like 5-7

No ,Go away.

take your time ,its better than someone who drops good fics.

Nice book ,I like the anime and read the manga and ln. The author is also good at writing which pleases me. Keep up the good work author.

wasn't it literally just created specifically for him? Not criticism just wanted to point out the mass-tsundere behind this statement

yeah it's a good story ,but try just looking up japanese names instead of just ripping them from naruto clans