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It's beautiful.
I laughed so hard at this.... Oh My God, this is really the kind of novel that is going to warped my sense of humor đ
The comedy in this novel is so good. Even the meta jokes is really funny đ
Is this the cue form the monocle return ?
I laughed too hard at this joke đ. Please don't give me a Sonic boom.
Definitely not a plothole đ
I was just thinking the same thing. I guess the energy during the snowstorm is from the Tyrant.
Man of culture! Unite đ
So the previous chapter tore apart harem tropes, and this one went for dumb bonehead MC? How fun.
Pun for Captain Hook? đ
I like big butts an´ I can not lie.
So how long is one day in the inn? Is it the same as earth?
This novel made me realize that I have a weakness for this kind of joke đ¤Ł
Again, this is way too real. How can you be so accurate dear author? Too bad Elric didn't have webnovel app in his world.
This is way too real. How can you be so accurate dear author?
You got me at "As a newbie author, I don't know how to make information dump interesting". I can't count how many superb novel I found who info dumps for word count. I still read them, but I skip the massive info dump because sometimes it is too much. Thank you for your effort.
I love this novel so much. That being said I would just focus on some things which might be a deal breaker for some. The filler. This novel is exhaustive with world building and setting, but it feels too much. A chapter would be half plot and half explanation, sometimes even worse. The harem. While the harem is filled with interesting character which grow and have their own story, it still feels very shallow. MC is a walking chick magnet and sometimes thinks with his d*ck. The story. Story is good and very interesting but moving at a snail pace. Product of excessive filler and too many characters to juggle. Harem members and subordinates stories is often put into the main storyline, sometimes it is interesting but most of the time it feels like it should be relegated to background. Despite all that I really enjoy the novel.