sigh , i don't care about aang but it's definitely unnecessary to be best friend to him all of sudden , and don't forget the MC in your story is always zan , not aang not sokka and definitely not zuko . Fanfic is to re-make the orignal to make your story unique not follow the original ,so yeah dissapointed

Hu liena , all villain heroines

you did a good job author ,not great . characters development always welcome but you should do more conversation than this ,it's getting boring just with thought and explanation . the only decent conversation is between mc and the monkey . anyway your fanfic isn't that bad .

next please

well i dunno which i want to vote , Naruto Universe already have many good chara , some OC enemies might be nice but don't make them outshine the cannon one i think ? so male/female OC is good i think .