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I'm liking where this is going. You've managed to so far do the hardest thing superhero fan fiction writers have trouble with; Making the mc not be a edgelord. Typically I tend to be against grey leaning superheroes, but Invincible's source material isn't like other superhero comics. So having Mark be a bit colder will not be too alien from the source material. I still would like to see him prioritize saving a life over taking one, but I can understand why he would in this. I partially wished you had saved the guardians, but I'm okay with their deaths too. Please keep up the good work.
To that extent how could Ron understand that, that particular set of hisses Harry made in his sleep was open and not say, "Please don't eat me." It was a plot issue in the actual series so its not on you, it just set a standard that if a human is exposed to enough parceltongue they will be able to speak a magical language through imitation.