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I'm not big in multiversal stuff, so try not to go that way unless absolutely necessary or at least try to keep it contained to the Invincible canon. With that said you could go whatever way you choose. Absolute power, absolutely corrupts or a better tomorrow superman style. Your character has no ties to any existing mythos save for Frieza himself who is the type to do whatever he wants. A big thing to remember is Invincible is also a part of the greater image comics universe. He directly interacts with several major superheroes a lot of people forget because they're neither DC or Marvel. Spawn is a big one who killed one of the Invincible clones. Jackie Estecado (a superhero who had two video games made about him -the Darkness 1 and 2) also fought one. And there are more. You can dip into their worlds as needed.

So I'm not a 100% sure this isn't some translated slop, but shouldn't the MC inform Cecil that the fracture point has appeared? I mean Mark has his powers shouldn't the MC tell him immediately? Omniman was waiting for proof that the viltrumites could successfully reproduce with humans and in turn know that the human race was worth conquering. If Mark casually mentions it to Nolan he got his pqers isn't he going to move forward with his mission?

No because it's how you wrote it. If you started changing stuff like this for fan outrage you could do it again in some other inane way to a worse degree. It's your story, it should be how you intend it. Don't be bullied into something that most of the readers (even those complaining) will not really end up caring about in the long run. Besides if they really hate the character and have to complain about him it'll just drive up engagement when they inevitably complain about him, and that will in turn increase engagement.

I can see the influence of the godfather in this chapter. Specifically the ending where Michael baptized his nephew and simultaneously wiped out the five families and moe green. I dig it.

You messed up in this one. You got everyone calling him Ethan. He's Ash now remember?

I'd agree but I'm more interested in letting the story go whatever way it goes. That said there is always the Canon option. It was eventually retconned that there were 3 jokers. It was a terrible storyline but it could be something.

I would put yanma and yanmega over pinsir. Then there are centiscorch and Scoliopede which are strong too. There are quite a few decent bugs. They just aren't as great by themselves save for the op volcorana.

I'm still slightly unsure if this is a translation or repost. That said I am mad you have forgotten the leaf village's strongest ninja. A ninja who has in fact spent the better part of 2 decades training to fight a Sharingan User, and developed a fighting style solely to beat them. The Noble Green Beast of Konaha has beaten both Itachi and has in fact killed Kisame. Might Guy is possibly the strongest ninja alive and possibly the second strongest ninja the Leaf Village has ever built. I think he could run through both of them without going to the 8th gate let alone with Jiraya and Tsunade backing him. Put some respect on his name.

Ff net and it was good from what I remember but it was never completed.

This took a 180 in tone from the first one....