Eiffel_Olympus

sorry for not clarifying but arlo was supposed to be 8 years of age in here.

I love the story the character and the world itself is good I love the pacing of the story and the cliche yet no cheesy romance between the characters. For me the pace was a bit slow but at the same time it doesn't matter since it goes really well in the story itself. Overall, this is a novel that worth to read!

Thank you i will try my best to fix it

Me too~!

Thank you for the suggestion~

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Thank you so much!

Thank you for suggestion!

This story is excellent in terms of character design, background, and the pacing of the narrative. With skillful storytelling, it creates a compelling zombie apocalypse tale. I highly recommend reading this novel.

Your novel is truly enjoyable, and I adore your writing style. The way you've described both the background and the characters really drew me into the story. The characters are well-crafted, though the story's pace, while decent, could be improved