ChaosIsNear

EST up

I opened the comments predicting that someone will say just that😂

Come on one more chapter

Vamos

It would be good if you start including the MC in the plot more and have him interact with the main cast more, also his power lvl is already over the roof and that happened very fast so maybe consider going for the slice of life genre for a couple of chapters to balance everything out, maybe have him focus on other things for the moment like creating a guild and roping in jin woo by providing an elixir for his mother or information about his father something like that, also it would be good if you explore romance or lay foundations for it, that of course if you can not rush it, i also hope you’re not going the harem route as a single female can get the readers more emotionaly invested and provide you with enough time to build the character its better than having pokemons right and left. he can have his flings of course…. Oh shit i ranted alot sorry😂 anw have your fun writing the story i was just giving some ideas

My eyes are burning

Where did this come from

Moreeeeeeee

Thanks

Oh wrong comment section😂