Rudrakstham39

half the chapters are missing and other halves are repeating ones. f**cking bullshitting and wasting my passes.

very good. finally after such a long time, there is a fan fiction which was completed in a very good way. ..

get well soon. .

dongchang of the United States. .seriously man. . .. how come everything turns to Chinese, means we are talking about the USA and now it has become Chinese part suddenly.

S.H.I.E.L.D. - Strategic Homeland Intervention, Enforcement and Logistics Division.

super serious criminals?????// really......[img=update]

The story is good, but when will you write it further. all the other ones are also halted in the middle as well.

the story is good and the idea about the revolution from the scratch by feeling the same difficulties as the masses felt them is very good and the story development is pretty good, as it has the different pov and thoughts to support the idea reflected in the story. Good fanfic to read.

good story development and writing is good as there are no language mistakes.

so far the writing is good and world background was kept in mystery as complete details were not shown, but the structure around it was well built and layered by later the details are showing. MC walks on the path of OPness from ground and has a good mentality so far.