Draconai
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1 power stone just for this paragraph
probably the first time, idk about after that
lol cyclops/ettin - for whatever reason I forgot about the second head and was picturing something kinda like the odyssey's cyclops
I think we mean "Into Felix's eye" as a cyclops, I mean =p
Careful. It might.
otherwise only offer base stats of like AP, MP, HP, and any updates
in either case I think it might be better to keep all of the stats and skills and stuff on a Wiki. like... by the chapter or something? if he expands any more in future chapters, or offer optional chapters to show the full stat block with no story
I think we mean "running on fumes" or Losing steam
that and he's still using Ole Greg as a training partner
hopefully this is addressed later, but the longer these stat blocks get the more padded the wordcount will be for purchasing chapters. just something to keep in mind
Wizards and salamanders? Oh shoot, here come dat mana. Probably gonna gain mage's knowledge as well
Didn't he JUST note how all magic is natural and typically good? I smell an agenda
There's some typos here and there and some strange phrasing occasionally, but this is a great story that will occasionally break the 4th wall to ease some tension. it's got puns and dumb jokes and asides to help break the near constant struggle, and it's balanced perfectly. I love the story and find the character development, interaction, and fighting and weapon research to be very thorough. the feeling of struggle and of a definite goal throughout, even when goals are questioned or pillars shaken, the reactions always feel in character, or at the least believable reactions. If anything else... I'll just say this... I've been reading on this site for a little over a year, and .of the dozens of books I've read, this is the first book to actually get me to buy coins.
So many easy opportunities in this book, me and my inappropriateness are having a grand old time. story is pretty dang good so far, though!
Special acts, you say?
talking in ln is usually " marks. thinking os often either italicized or with '
I'm splitting my stones and FP between this and vampire system. sucks when I can only read 1-2 chapters a day of each, but I'll catch up and it'll help me pace myself so I don't burn out and I can enjoy everything over a longer period of time =p Absolutely love this story and am honestly surprised there's not more readers/ voters than the 900-1k a day I usually see