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is this a prelude towards dectruction of British magic society. please let wilhem flexing a bit against the racist bigots.

Goodluck with your story but force dumb plot and development make this cringe to read.... xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

wow it took 247 Chapters, 7 years (1 year in HP, 6 Years in time chamber) for him to realize that.

Who's Yuta?

I have few suggestion, maybe you could give them consideration: 1. Natarle became archangel captain during EA invasion to ORB so Murrue could became captain of the new ptolemeus ship. 2. make MC design Gunbarrel backpack for Mu la Flaga when he pilotted Strike Gundam. 3. don't put too many OC in the story, in many fanfic i read OC put the pace of the story slow due to author obligated to give them character development. thank you for the chapter

Murrue would be good. she's my fave captain in gundam universe and the second one is Sumeragi due to their big "personality".

Dainsleif or Laevateinn perhaps

Is this Foreshadowing?

i thought about it, but he will not learn it if i keep telling him. lol[img=recommend]