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What a pair!đ A true husband and wife for the ages!â¤ď¸
No! FAS and WMY are too similar. FAS belongs with the Mountain Queen and WMY belongs with someone smart and capable, maybe another commander or maybe Mountain Queenâs brother
No, Iâm pretty sure âhe and his wifeâ is also grammatically correct.
He and Feather are the same! So petty and childishđ¤đđ¤Łđ
He was not one to be trifled with.
She didnât lose the right to be a mother, but the ability to give birth.
Two daughters
If i remember correctly, manshi is only 18. doesnât that mean heâs sleeping with a minor?!
Or the secret that she threw her own 5yo daughter away
Maybe its written to be confusing? I know heatstroke can leave you very disoriented, not to mention she also reincarnated. The writing could be a reflection of her state of mind?
I donât inow if anyone has told you this, but when speaking about the ruler, they are referred to as his/her majesty and only when speaking directly to the ruler, are they referred to as your majesty. Just so you know!đ
This story has a smooth flow to it, as well as detailed, but not overly so, world building. So far, the characters are like-able and you can actually see the FL and the ML possibly getting together, though the age gap is a bit much. Overall, it seems to be off to a good start. I hope it is picked to continue updating and I get to see where this couple takes me.
Sheâs in the cultivation room wHich slows time down even further
đ¤ŁIâm dying, literally dying!!!