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WHITE3yrReplied to LuffyLucyCh 1 A Fried Cake- WHITE3yrReplied to LuffyLucy
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Your writing style is simple but very beautiful. Your depiction of Adria in the chapters is wonderful. your narration of her pains in her teens is painful to read. I love badass female leads, so I am looking forward to the development of the iron lady. As there are only 5 chapters I don't know how the story will develop, so I can only wait. Your back ground of the story is to the point and i like that. I think you should stabilize your updates since you already have 8 reviews. the pace is normal till here. Keep up the good work!
- WHITE3yrReplied to imagineTishaDCh 8 Chapter 7
- WHITE3yrReplied to FLORA_BARUA
yes
By 'how', I am studying it in school, you know the real version. By 'why', I sympathize with Shylock. He had a great affinity for money all right, but what Antonio and his companions did to him was truly saddening. That's when I thought, why not have revenge? - WHITE3yrReplied to Undead_Tai
- WHITE3yrCommentedCh 1 An Oracle
- WHITE3yrCommented
yes, guilt is a really painful feeling. it wont go away even if you beg.
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okay, thanks for telling
"Dear brother, please do not be upset about yourself. You never asked for these impure little eyes, I know that very well. But, what can I do? This kingdom is in need of a king, a... a pure magic containing king! So, even though I was reculant to be the crown prince, I became a likable candidate to the throne. Don't worry, I may consider about making you my minister." Louise said arrogantly. Lawrence never use to say much back to his arrogance, but now he is quiet bold enough to do so. "Never knew my brother was this kind. If you are reculant to be the crown prince, hand me the position. I know you will be happy to do so." This got Louise off guard and he widened his eyes. But he regained his composure and said. "Oh come dear brother, my magic is better that yours, so how can I give it to you?" "Brother Louise, did you forget? I was 'lost' in London for studies. Either way, I had more standard education than you, so the kingdom should go with the wise king." Louise was enraged, but he calmed down and said again, "Brother, our great grandmother is the one writing the will of who will lead the kingdom. I had been with her since birth and always visited that poor soul." Lawrence asked, "Had she written the will yet?" " N..No? But she will write one soon." Louis had a trace of doubt and uneasiness in his voice and face, a polar opposite to the arrogant and proud face he had when he first came. Lawrence smirked and walked past him saying, "Yes she will. And then let's see, whose name shall the will contain." - WHITE3yrReplied to FLORA_BARUACh 3 Chapter 2
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a sad truth
But their feelings do not matter, only opinions of society can. - WHITE3yrCommented
alright, hi
6. If you like BL, GL or any LGBT+, I like you, let's be friends Lol. - WHITE3yrCommented
i am the same haha
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