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haha, thank you!

thank you for the comment! I will write more comedies!

hehe... thanks!

Your writing style is simple but very beautiful. Your depiction of Adria in the chapters is wonderful. your narration of her pains in her teens is painful to read. I love badass female leads, so I am looking forward to the development of the iron lady. As there are only 5 chapters I don't know how the story will develop, so I can only wait. Your back ground of the story is to the point and i like that. I think you should stabilize your updates since you already have 8 reviews. the pace is normal till here. Keep up the good work!

That's one thing you will never know... [sorry]

I was thinking of doing that. I also don't want a sweet person. Elrod is cunning and tactful. I want to make him a dangerous man.

yes

thank you for the kind words, I will surely continue!!

very intersting chap. great opening!!

yes, guilt is a really painful feeling. it wont go away even if you beg.