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Dk, I just think being able to ignore the law of space doesn't equal casual precise space manipulation. Like ignoring gravity doesn't mean controled flight or telekinesis. Maybe his power does more than just ignore laws and can be very accurate and clear-cut about the desired effects...or I just forgot the specifics of his power, It's been a while.
Tenten, how could you!?
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Nah, It's right. terror + full = terrorful = full of terror
Could a rank 7 cultivator inspect the human essence of a mortal and tell him his most suited path?
So is Zhi a half otherworldly demon?
Scheming and manipulating until the reconstruction, plz. And personally I enjoy the slow build up.
Looking forward to it.
"Gehald is no more, only legion remains and legion is the expression of his obsession" Idk, but from my perspective, it seems like this line doesn't seem to indicate any beneficial change, he is no more, what he is now is but an expression of his obsession...plus he isn't as calculative, mature and carfull as he should be considering his age and experience. But that's just me, your story is solid; I'm enjoying it and very much looking forward to the world building.
[PERSONALLY] This is a big turnoff in the story, the mc is consciously abandoning his sence of self and identity for what? to prove a point to himself? to become a hub of consciousness...
Aizen? I'm assuming it's keith.
I don't think It's based on anything, It's an original. It draws inspiration from a genre of novels that have a villain who is supposed to be a stepping stone to the protagonist, but gets a "villain" system to change their destiny and come out on top at the expense of the original protagonist usually by taking their opportunities, heroines, ect...
Well, Keith is a miracle doctor plus knows a lot of secrets, so the fact that she can cultivate is a testament to his ability, not her unutilised talent, if she has any, plus don't forget about the standard of his harem, not to mention the trouble of Qingyue. What I'm trying to say is that she isn't worth it, and to be honest, why bother? She's like forty something, married, and actually looks her age since she isn't an aurror(maybe Keith will help boost her looks) and can barely hope to cultivate and is the mother of his very important lover, and this is more of a personal point but she isn't even a virgin. The only way I see this being logical is if Keith develops feelings towards her.
I hope Celine won't be part of Keith's harem. She's a middle aged wife with no cultivation talent, who's only remarkable trait is her painting prowess, she isn't a good investment but is a liability since her being Qingyue's mother only creates unnecessary trouble.