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Kudos to making it this far. I love the concept of this novel. And I have a few questions for you :) 1. Is Xander dead? 2. What are your career Aspirations 3. Will this novel be a movie? 4. Will this novel be a hard copy 5. What do you envision for the future of this novel? 6. Are the knights incompetent? 7. Do u know me : )? XOXO The person with one more L
Ch 51 Author's Note - June_Darby2yrCommentedCh 44 Kingdom of Gold
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SyNconised Drums??
Mikhail awoke to the sound of rhythmic and synchronised beating of the drums before a soft melody permeated through, the drums fading to silence. - June_Darby2yrCommented
*he dragged
"Since you're so lively, why don't you follow me and prep for departure?" the guide said as they dragged Susie by her arm out of the door, shutting it behind them. - June_Darby2yrCommented
Hmmmmm
"Uh... yes." Mikhail replied as he headed towards the door, his hand soothing his racing heart. - June_Darby2yrCommentedCh 43 A Rocky Journey
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Tell me how u add fire to fIreplace. I want to knowww
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Main protagonist always does that
Everything is a mess now... Its almost as if that guy brought his misfortune upon us. Father... - June_Darby2yrCommented
LOL efficiency gone
"Are you defying my orders, Louis? In the absence of the King and Queen, I am the one with the highest authority." - June_Darby2yrCommented
what is it with the kids' obsession with grabbing collars? Mikhail and William man
"The arrow was laced with poison I'm afraid. However, I have already dispatched some men to collect the ingredients necessary to create a cure for it. Please be at ease." Louis said as he patted William's hands that were grabbing him up by the collar. - June_Darby2yrCommented
OOOO who this other guy
Having to see him... Can today get any worse? - June_Darby2yrCommented
Xander, how about. May the light of the divine one guide your path? Light repeated twice bruh
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Technically he did. He went Nerd mode for a sec and not doing night duties
"What do you mean he was poisoned?! What were the knights doing?! Why aren't you doing anything?!" Lilith yelled as she threw her wine goblet at Louis, the blood red liquid splashing over him. - June_Darby2yrCommented
Acknowledged Xander as Father: part 1 of reconciliation with father passed
William was right. I'm not... Good enough... If I lose Xander as well... No... Giving up is akin to losing him. And that is a mistake that I can't stand to bear. I will get the flower! Just hang in there a bit more longer Xander... no... father... - June_Darby2yrCommented
Oops, everything went wrong
Miracles stem from belief and hard work. Surely he will be fine. There was no way anything could possibly go wrong. - June_Darby2yrCommented
No bb. IT was the Author mistake :)
Do I... bring calamities? Was going to the Kingdom a mistake? - June_Darby2yrCommented
ew.
"Th-then... what about me?! I'm cold too!" Susie said as she threw off her cloak, staring expectantly at Mikhail. - June_Darby2yrCommented
I read Carriage as Carnage. that was two different settings
As Susie entered the carriage, she stared through the small opening at the guide. An act she could only do for the time being as the route ahead of them were close to foreign for her. It would be unwise to rid themselves of the guide. - June_Darby2yrCommented
Yup Susie is an It now. She got depromoted
"It'll do. We should reach the nearest town. Lestria is ways from here. Also... I've been meaning to say but... keep your feral... creature away from me."