Come back here, author, fix your early chapters, it's hard to read a good work with so many typos

Come back here, you damn*d Translator! Just because you edited a few earlier chapters, doesn't mean you need to abandon the next ones! I'll comment like this in every chapter I found has a flaw and you just left it at it is since the day you release it!

I see, you're a typical stubborn writer who can't accept criticism, always stick on your own wrong perception, and always justify that what have been formulated in your own brain added with "wiki" materials is only truth.. Transformation jutsu doesn't work that way, it's just change outward appearance, similar with how genjutsu work. If a pebble transformed into a sword, no matter how many you slashed or pierce something with it, the blade will be always dull.

Hello author, can you come back here and edited your earlier chapters.. it's very annoying to read consistent typo.. yeah that "Kuni" is very much disgustingly triggering my OCD..

fortunately, as far as I read to tge latest chapter your writing seems to be improved than the early chapters, please maintain the same quality 🤗

I hate it when author switching POV so often like it was a normal thing to do. Are a newbie writer or something?

Actually, it's not a problem if you want to continue a project that has been abandoned by your predecessor, but at least please make a little effort to edit it, dawg. The translation is so bad it looks like you just copied it from Google Translate, even though there is already Chat GPT and deepL.

Now the whole novel is finished, aren't you gonna fix all the mess you got from using MTL? Honestly it's kinda garbage TL for me, but I stay because how good the story is..

This chapter is beautifully written. The emotions, the words, I can say enough thanks to let me to read your work, sir.

That's the wrong approach if you decided to bend everything in the story for the sake of reader. And please try to have 1 point of view for stability. I definitely drop this if you mix both 1st and 3rd POVs in the same chapter, so please just use 1 of them for the nex upadates until you finish this work.

I hope you make this Marverick guy as same with marvel Hawkeye or DC Merlin or DC Green Arrow, not just another Yasopp or another Van Augur

Great, I will take back some of my opinions few chapters back, you definitely learning how to write better! 🤗👌🏼

Mu review until this chapter: 1. I will count and assume that aithor is either a newbie at writing or just inexperienced writer who want to try to put his delusional turn into a story 2. I'll let it pass as the work have decent writing with 90-95% grammar correct 3. I'll assume this story is not based purely MCU but another universe and this MC is just another variant of Peter Parker, because all characters you got inserted so far is not comic and movie accurate

Weird, as far as I know, Spider Tom doesn't have any hole in his wrists to spew some webs like Spider Tobey... Don't you have any excuse to that?

The concept is good, but writing is so terrible and hard to read. It would make sense if the author is not a native with English as his/her primary language. The grammar is thrown out of the window, the vocabulary is a mess, the plot is just like teenager greedy with power and trash mixed personality

The writing getting worse and worse, did the author hiring a proofreader? And stop that word count! It's super annoying!

Where's the author? He need to change all of his mistyping! Who the hell is Fukasuke? Another brother of Sasuke? And what the effing eff is Myobaku?!!!

So you abandoned this story and only write the TWD?

Why did you write how Kataoka so adamant for not having Rei to be the Ace? Is Kataoka an idiot in your story? Choosing super talented player even though a bit rebellious like Rei is lesser evil than waiting Sawamura talent to bloom in his 2nd year, even Furuya weapon by being fast throw doesnt help the team in crucial moments in manga and anime

I see, I'm confused for the references back then, but now I know that Kuroneko's Ashborn is from Solo Leveling, and Yuuko's Legendary Mechanic is from Black Star/Han Xiao