MarcusDeGabriel

How’s this, basically the same wothout the add-on’s and without the elf ears.

Some of these words don’t seem right, such as “members” and “stroked”

What the hell? Since when has he ever planned to be a king? I honestly never saw it and was expecting him to fic his body here before ending up in the Grand Order world to help there! This feels really out of left field to me.

It’s not really confusing, but it just feels like so much. I just thought i should at least give this fic a proper chance and read to the latest.

Have you watched Fire Force? If so what about making a fic using Benimaru Shinmon! He has some pretty amazing power, but i would ask for it without any world crossovers, it’s just too much.

I’m hanging in there, but i’m really not a fan of it. There’s just so many things hoing on and even after such a huge event we now have a plot that spans at least 5 other seperate dimensions not even counting Canon and Emperor world! It’s just become really convoluted and reminiscent of the worst events and crossovers in Marvel or DC. I am trying, but it really does feel like every other chapter there’s ANOTHER thing popping up, so while some will enjoy it it’s really dragging on me.

Honestly i was expecting him to bite into his own wrist to use his own blood to draw the summoning circles. This entire thing has been a wild ride.