Also, forgot to say this, but when was the MC ever portrayed as naive? I might try to rewrite that part since he's not supposed to look naive. In these early chapters, I was trying to portray him as someone who had a lot of secrets and was holding himself back.

It gets more brutal later on, don't worry. The first few chapters are pretty tame for the sake of worldbuilding.

Okay, he's part of the problem. At first I thought that he's going to tell the truth and that no one would believe him. But he's just digging his grave deeper.

Ok, I stand corrected. Author is either British or Australian.

Correction: Only a few countries have them. Among them, most are English-speaking countries like the US, Canada, UK, and Australia. Generally speaking, 90% of the world don't have the culture of maintaining lawns, and this includes Japan.

Who tf is Satoshi?

Also, let me ask you this. Do animals care about nature? Of course they don't. Their instinct is just to survive and thrive. That's just the basis of life. You're saying that most humans don't care about nature, but ironically, mot caring about nature is more natural than caring about it.

You're basing your arguments from fiction. It's just impossible for these races to be far less destructive than humans. Logically speaking, the technological development of a society is parallel to what they take from their surroundings. Humans weren't always as destructive as we are now. Think back to the pre-industrial era of humanity. Human-related pollution was almost nonexistent. Yes, we did cause a lot of animal species extinction, but those were because of overhunting. You might think that that's exclusive to humans, but nope, even chimpanzees do it. So it's pretty much just primal instinct.

Even elves are destructive. Their food, clothes, buildings, and many other things, are all made of natural resources. You cannot create something out of nothing. Logically speaking, a give and take process is absolute.

Are you sure about that? All other apes have been shown to have just as much greed and destructive behaviour as humans do. It's just a matter of intellect. Other apes can't utilize a human-level intelligence as its tool for their greedy and destructive behaviour. These Asuras however, have the same behaviour and intelligence as humans. I can assure you that these Asuras are the same as humans. They only pick and choose whether they think what they're doing is destructive or not. The world revolves around give and take. To make something, you have to take it from another thing. Creating something out of nothing is literally impossible.

If anyone's willing to draw an anime-styled portrait of Elizabeth for free, please tell me. I would be really grateful, and I'll use it for the cover art. I'll even credit you in the novel's description.

This is a more recent review of my own novel. It's not joke review, and I would like to dedicate this to people who are interested in reading this novel. The start is a bit slow due to the worldbuilding, but worry not, things will kick in. You might think that there's a lack of action and romance at the start, but again, don't worry. Things will truly start to consistently progress after a certain torture scene. Anyways, this story is actually hardcore sci-fi disguised as fantasy. So I hope you guys won't mind if the story switches genres in later parts.

Probably someone religious. They can't bear seeing someone talk about "God" negatively. Thank God I'm an atheist(Pun intended).

You all*

You are*

This day and age*

Would have, not "Would've". The latter is not correct. Btw, these simple grammar mistakes are making me annoyed. They're so simple that you would learn about them when you learn English for the first time.

This one doesn't make sense context-wise.

Should be "Charles' " or "Charles's", both are grammatically correct by the way.

Even though it's grammatically correct, "We have" is the best choice here. Using "We've" just sounds clunky and not natural.