Thanks for the chapter! Im actually most excited about the organization arc. I hope to see a lot of detail and time spent on finding talented subordinates and training kids with good potential. Plenty of people love your writing but in general only the haters spend time harassing you, if all your fans commented the positive feedback would definitely outweigh the negative.

Shouldn’t his spirit be at 120?

Shouldnt his spirit be at 120? From his title?

It would be cool if Tyson got the Steel Body talent and then evolved into a fighting/steel type Machamp that looks like the X-man Colossus! That would be a cool discovery

I wish you wouldn’t write this “sheeple” and “youve got to be a leader not a follower” its so cringey and it reads like you’re trying to write Harry like an Andrew Tate style “Alpha Male” and it’s annoying

I wish you wouldn’t write this “sheeple” and “youve got to be a leader not a follower” its so cringey and it reads like you’re trying to write Harry like an Andrew Tate style “Alpha Male” and it’s annoying

What an idiot, its literally impossible to think that hard

An extremely enjoyable read, most stories on this website get high ratings even if they suck but this story deserves all 5 stars. The MC isn’t OP but he doesnt lose when he should win, the power balancing is very good. My only complaint so far is that I think his force code is dorky lol

Can I say maybe? A harem of 3-4 would be best imo

Ideally he would go face the Gold and Silver brothers and be put into a coma or something, then the homage hat gets passed on and Tsunade will have to work hard to heal him. That way when he wakes up he’ll be at full power but it won’t be useful because the wars over and he’ll be weak until his body recovers from the atrophy. Coma could last 2-3 years and give Tsunade time to grow into a Jonin so his help would be even less useful. At that point news of his death will have spread and he would be Konohas secret weapon and he would mainly serve as an advisor or researcher unless Konoha is invaded. I think it’s ideal if the whole village thinks he’s dead but Tsunade doesn’t have to lose anyone this way and he’ll be relegated to being a character that creates jutsu or offers advice but nothing else. Then you could kill him off when the Kyuubi breaks free from Kushina and that would keep Minato and Kushina alive as well as give Tsunade a reason to be more proactive about the Akatsuke

What’s the point of writing if you don’t change anything? Tobirama has several available options and instead of taking the path that might allow him to truly damage other hidden villages he just chooses to kill himself? If he dies I’m dropping this novel

MC seems like a crybaby, he’s so full of angst

Like you could have simply lowered his power level to make conflict more difficult or made it to where he can only use a certain worlds magic rather than his own or something literally anything would be better than literally not being able to change anything

What possible reason could he have for not using observation haki at all times

I simply can’t enjoy the story with how much angst the MC is drowning in, I understand that the author intends to have him get over it eventually but it’s already been too long for me. Simply can’t stand this guy wallowing in self pity it’s so pathetic it detracts from everything else. The plot is entirely based around the MCs angst and how horrible his life is and all his self pity but little to no substance otherwise. Just not for me, and by no means is the writing bad, I’m just a perfect example of toxic masculinity because I can’t stand the weakness of the MC and it really angers me that he’s so stuck wallowing in self pity that he can’t seem to see all the amazing benefits and opportunities he’s been granted as if his situation wasn’t something people would do anything for

What happened to Uriel’s body? Wasn’t he going to use it as well?

Papa George with the big flex

Don’t mind the idiots man! I appreciate the hard work you put into your writing and I hope you and your old man find peace and closure, I lost my own to a heart attack last year and I know how much I wish I had just a couple more weeks with him. Take all the time you need boss! You’ve got my support!

MC behaves like a spoiled child

Seems forced