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xXkiaraXx6mthCommentedOh my, it almost seems as if he's unfit to lead a clan like that! And shame on the clan for continuing to allow such an unstable character to lead them.
"Oh, I am but an old mind whose unstable emotions get the best of me all the time. I promised you that I have no malicious intention toward the realm, and it is not my intention to deny His words. I merely think about what's best for the realm, even though it was wrong of me to do so," he clutched his chest, and with his old, fragile-looking physique, it was easy to incite pity.- xXkiaraXx7mthCommented
So what can they extort -ahem- I mean request for in exchange for accepting and passing this here trial? I mean it's not a requirement but a demand from the elders so such demands come with compensation right
Ch 228 If someone gives you a lemon, you eat it in front of them and spit the seed right into their eyes - xXkiaraXx9mthCommented
Those numbers don't quite match up... 7 total but there's only 6 elves and drow?
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Yes, I would not face him as a human. I would face him as a Royal Arbiter. - xXkiaraXx10mthCommentedCh 138 We shouldn’t use violence in front of a child
- xXkiaraXx11mthCommentedCh 184 5.33
- xXkiaraXx1yrCommentedCh 298 Activities in Bed
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- xXkiaraXx1yrCommentedCh 2 When the past is the present
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Catching up and still have some to do but I'm looking forward to where the overall story goes. I did want to give some feedback from a readers standpoint though. Maybe most of this is just me and not others. While these two have their own interesting story or backstory, it doesn't really seem relevant at all at this point in the story or plot. It seems so far removed from the premise of the story and what happened in the beginning that it seems really out of place and kind of not needed right now. Especially with how many chapters it's been. I get introducing a character or characters that will be more relevant later like some of Alexis' backstory but he was already mentioned previously and also seems to have a big part later as likely being the guy in Georgi's visions/dreams. It also was fairly short, especially compared to this. From the previous future these 2 seem to be completely irrelevant aside from 1 being in the Black Hawks previously and then setting up future regulations for the military. It's seems like a full side story is being told when it should be more of a backstory for the military. This full side story doesn't seem to have any bearing on where things are at so far and doesn't seem to lend much to it aside from world building where it isn't really necessary. This does seem like an important story to include to you but I'm not sure if this is the place for it as a reader. It kind of takes you out of immersing in the story and the actual characters the story was initially about, especially so early in the book. Again these are just my thoughts, maybe it's just me. I do look forward to where this goes and I can tell you put quite a bit into building up things in this world.
Ch 34 The paths in front of him once again - Maritsu and Gabriel POV - xXkiaraXx1yrCommentedCh 174 5.24
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