At first there are some mistakes though but the more you keep on writing, the more it keep on getting better, good job! Story getting well, the Jealous Jinchen will be showing soon bec of the fL admirers around her🤣😂cant wait to see how would our ML do.

More wow for me 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤..I like the story though

Pretty good! Like the story because I'm into romance novel, suited my taste. Thank for the story, I just hope you won't stop writing this novel.