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ThePhoenix943mthCommentedCh 230 The Abomination Faction- ThePhoenix943mthReplied to Stephen_Maher_4802Ch 311 Mylene and Sarah
- ThePhoenix943mthCommentedCh 895 Lesson Learnt: Never Underestimate Yanderes
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100 competitions over 1 thousand years = once every 10 years, not 100. Perhaps you mean 100 competitions over 10 thousand years, if it's supposed to be once every 100 years?
If the Babylon Guild helped to finance the competition, the Moebius Sect would hardly see a dent in day to day operations. Based on the wording, the competition would be held every 100 years! - ThePhoenix944mthCommented
Schrodinger's relic?
Lind would live or he would die. They waited to see which would become true. - ThePhoenix944mthCommented
I noticed it the previous time mentioned, but I thought it was a fluke. Has "Imperial Overseer" been changed to "Overlord"?
Finally, the former Overlord had clearly been influenced by Altair in many ways with bribes and other resources for cultivation to push off the responsibility to the Frey Clan who was not supposed to be involved. - ThePhoenix944mthReplied to mythosarcanaCh 13 Chapter 12 - Childhood Ends
- ThePhoenix944mthCommentedCh 101 Chapter 100 - Undersea Ruin
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I wanna know this too
"Get in, Lind Frey. It will feel odd to drop in but we have done this successfully many times for thousands of years." Lind nodded and hopped in as he strapped himself into the chair inside. A glance of surprise passed over a few of the guards but no one commented on it. - ThePhoenix944mthReplied to Hlf_HogstarCh 141 Mal & The Girls Connect
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Just out of curiosity, is the name Aisha pronounced A-isha or Ai-isha? Or some other way?
The woman currently on the phone was his oldest friend and closest confidant Aisha. - ThePhoenix945mthReplied to UrekSenpa1
Ah, I understnad. However, I feel you should at least mention what the actual effect of the pill was so that we readers don't have to sit here, scratching our heads, wondering what happened. It feels unresolved, to be honest. The fact that you wrote in the part about his sickness and the present/pill makes it seem like an important part of world building, and thus, the pill's effect should be mentioned, too. Just my thoughts on this
Ch 185 Relevant Interruption - ThePhoenix945mthCommented
Is Nuhel an adult already? Or is it supposed to be Seth?
The significant wealth presented to Nuhel left their parents in a state of astonishment. Despite the family's recent ascent in wealth and power, the sheer magnitude of the gift surpassed their expectations. As an adult, Nuhel now had the freedom to utilize this wealth as he deemed fit. If questioned about its origin, he could easily fabricate a story, perhaps attributing it to the sale of cores from the mana beasts he encountered during his training. The newfound affluence hinted at a future where Nuhel could wield both financial and magical resources to shape his path.