ThePhoenix94

Did he say this or is it just a random line? Also, your chapter title was repeated as the first sentence in the chapter 👀

She says good night twice? 👀

subconsciously* to do something without thinking, like instinct. Unconscious is when you are not awake, for example when in a coma

You're suddenly using present tense instead of past tense here 👀 is that deliberate?

I'm starting to wonder.. Maybe, if Kael ends up being the ancestor of his own wives (multiple/all of them), maybe his & Rheanne's lineages are the ones capable of becoming awakeners? Maybe a bit of an "out there" theory, but I wonder if it's possible and what the implications would be 👀

Ooh, revealing a spoiler just like that? 👀

I'm flattered you mention me in your story! Thank you, and well done!

Oh, so this is some kind of flashback? Would've been very helpful if there was something to indicate that, like a "Flashback: 5 years ago" or similar, at the start. Very confusing to go through these chapters without knowing that part

Oh, I'm too early. That's unfortunate

subconscious* not unconscious [img=recommend]