Odd_Hound
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Really sorry for the lack of updates. I got an infection in my ears and I have a bunch of work to do so I'm behind schedule. I'll update until the chapters 50~51 that I have already written, after that I'll take a small break to finish all my work and come back to write again. Really sorry guys.
Thanks for the review. I can't deny the grammar is bad in the first 3 chapters, but after that, it got good enough as I started to use the app to fix that. Plus a reader gave a piece of good advice to use ChatGPT to help with it too, so I believe it got better. Nevertheless, I indeed need to re-edit the first few chapters.
Oh thanks for fiding it.
They can, but yeah I phrased that wrong. It was supposed to mean that they just can't touch the ground outside the ring.
It is interesting. It would give a lot of interesting events if he goes to make his own universe. Like we know that creation and destruction walk side by side, with both gods having their own function inside DB universe, so maybe in your story Vegeta would be both, the creator and the destroyer. [img=Feeling it]
Mm, that's a good question. Honestly, I don't plan to put her in this fic, I think her fights just don't align with Vegeta's objective here, so it would be a bit hard to create a good plot based on that. But who knows it may change in the future.
Yeah, unless a problem happens she won't go evil 21.